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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:11 am
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I'm trying to write an MK fanfiction, and i have a cool character planned out, i just need a good name! Please give me good suggestions and give me multiple suggestions! (or the link to a decent translator so i can make a foreign name or something) thanks!
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You can't just ask for a name dude lol
We need something else to work with so the name suits the Kharacter.
Giz a little backstory or describe his personality and physique etc. I'll help you out Im kinda good at this 
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I got a name! Steel, it's for his power, currently i'm writing his background i'll give ya what i got so far
History: Young boy steel was born in NYC with a special ability, an ability to bend metal, Hence his name. This ability made him rejected socially, making Steel mentally unstable, and isolated him from society. Alone
that's all i got right now, but he's got these kickass weapons hard to describe... so here's the article
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cestus
basically, they're battle gloves with spikes on em i'll post more info after you respond
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| 3cyborgninjas wrote: | I got a name! Steel, it's for his power, currently i'm writing his background i'll give ya what i got so far
History: Young boy steel was born in NYC with a special ability, an ability to bend metal, Hence his name. This ability made him rejected socially, making Steel mentally unstable, and isolated him from society. Alone
that's all i got right now, but he's got these kickass weapons hard to describe... so here's the article
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cestus
basically, they're battle gloves with spikes on em i'll post more info after you respond |
Haha reminds me of avatar the last airbender which I think is really funny.
Those Cestus weapons are badass dude congrats I love shit takin from medievil old skool stuff. Thats why MK is so kool there is so much culture borrowed from EVERYWHERE! So exactly how is his Cestus different? Keep up the good work and please don't turn him into this:
http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/videolinks/thatguywiththeglasses/nostalgia-critic/9031-steel
PLEASE WATCH THE VID ITS LONG BUT REALLY FUNNY.
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 5:14 am
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I like to call that show Avatard.
TGWTG is lagging like shit right now so i can't load it.
I'm gonna restart writing the background. the way i'm writing it he knows nothing martial arts, which is what i like to focus on more.
If you read the article, it says the romans updated them with metal spikes and studs Steel can shoot that shit out of his Cesti
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Ah man leave avatar alone lol 
Yeah TGWTG is one of the slowest sites for loading vids but he is funny lol
Hate his MK movie review though, hi annihilation one i good though.
Yeah incorporating his powers with the weapons I like it man. I look forward to some gruesome bad guy deaths with Steel haha
Remember to be creative but not so much as it just fucks it up y'no. Does that even make sense to you? lol
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Well he's gonna be evil so you mean good guy ass? Haha
yeah people who do that who make it creative throughout are jackasses all the descriptions get boring
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Name:
Alignment:
age: 17
Weapons: Steel Cesti (battle gloves) with spikes
Powers: Metal bending
projectile: Shoot spikes from cesti
Finisher: Shoots spikes at points in opponents body and bends the metal and crushes the opponent
Finisher2: shoots spikes in formation of opponent behind opponent then kicks the opponent on the spike strip
martial arts style: American Kickboxing
appearance: 6'2" caucassian male brown afro hoodie sweatshirt black converse hi-tops aviator sunglasses baggy pants
background:
origin of powers:
Goals:
That's all i got so far, could you help me develop him a bit more?
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Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:28 am
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| 3cyborgninjas wrote: | I got a name! Steel, it's for his power, currently i'm writing his background i'll give ya what i got so far
History: Young boy steel was born in NYC with a special ability, an ability to bend metal, Hence his name. This ability made him rejected socially, making Steel mentally unstable, and isolated him from society. Alone
that's all i got right now, but he's got these kickass weapons hard to describe... so here's the article
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cestus
basically, they're battle gloves with spikes on em i'll post more info after you respond |
Why would being able to bend metal make you socially rejected?[/url]
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:21 am
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| 3cyborgninjas wrote: | Name:
Alignment:
age: 17
Weapons: Steel Cesti (battle gloves) with spikes
Powers: Metal bending
projectile: Shoot spikes from cesti
Finisher: Shoots spikes at points in opponents body and bends the metal and crushes the opponent
Finisher2: shoots spikes in formation of opponent behind opponent then kicks the opponent on the spike strip
martial arts style: American Kickboxing
appearance: 6'2" caucassian male brown afro hoodie sweatshirt black converse hi-tops aviator sunglasses baggy pants
background:
origin of powers:
Goals:
That's all i got so far, could you help me develop him a bit more? |
I dunno about the clothes you picked man. Sounds too steriotypical black male to me. You should giv him a more demented or meaner persona and attire if you want him to be evil with an afro. Do you know what I mean. Take "Afro Samurai" for example a favourite manga/anime of mine.
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i have completely set aside that idea. It wouldn't work no matter how hard i tried. so, i'm creating a new character. But i need help with the
Alignment
Powers (kinda thinking abilityto grow limbs, or duplication,or substitution)
background
origin of powers
purpose
appearance
and style I would love to get your opinions and thoughts!
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oh! i was also considering the ability to eat stuff...
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:35 am
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Try not to double post man, just edit the previous one. If memory serves right, double posting is against board rules.
On the subject, I'm pretty sure eating as a power has been done before:
As for Avatar the Last Airbender, it was slow the first season, but damn those last two seasons had some damn good writing and animation.
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| VainZiler wrote: | Try not to double post man, just edit the previous one. If memory serves right, double posting is against board rules.
On the subject, I'm pretty sure eating as a power has been done before:
As for Avatar the Last Airbender, it was slow the first season, but damn those last two seasons had some damn good writing and animation. |
Thanks dude. I didn't know that.
I completely forgot about Kirby. It's almost impossible thinking of an original power. What would you suggest?
The main reason i didn't like it was because i thought for awhile it had no feeling in it. Which made it bland for me.
Would this be unoriginal if the character had a weapon that was in the same category as another character's weapon but not the exact weapon?
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:45 pm
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Dude every idea is based on something else lol
So id say....no wait what exactly do you mean by the last bit of your comment?
You need to think of the basis yourself too man you asking for too much it would mean the character wasn't created by you but by every one else's ideas Y'no?
So just think hard about that stuff and then you should take ppl's ideas into view y'no to make the character YOU make better and more developed.
Oh and to Vain Yes man Avatar's last 2 season's were badass.
The last few episodes were unreal! Excellent show.
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