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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 1:22 am
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i am starting to write more again, i dunno if some of you remember but a while ago i used to post songs i had wrote and all of you seemed to liek them, i just for some reason got into a fink and didn't write for about 3 months but now i have all my sh*t back together i am able to start writing and making music again with my bands and i love it, but yeah i will start posting more that have written if any of you care to read them
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Draconian Demon
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 1:26 am
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Lets see them, I enjoy writing myself. Here are some of mine.
Dirge
Ebony tears fall from my eyes
Solitary passion fulfilling me
Dreams come and they go
Washed upon desolate shores
Forgotten
Torches cut through the gentle night
White garden of roses bloodied
Through this vineyard I walk alone
A silhouette of passion upon the moon
Fallen
Romantic Sorrow
Make love to my soul
Into a dark supremacy I go
Bloody strings orchestrate my leave
I never shall return
My soul descends into infinity
Forever lost I fall
Through misty shards
Bloody strings orchestrate my leave
In joy
A funeral wind blows beyond the structures
One withered rose rests upon a coffin
Frostbitten, cold, alone
One frozen tear crystallized on the structure
Wept through infinite glory
Untitled
Angels fly above us now
Horrific light raping the night
Kissing this bloody stone
We fall forever alone
In this world of torment
Father, teach us how to hate
To leave this sad world behind
Let us live this life we choose
To molest the purest virgin
To crucify you upon our stake
Forgive us father
As we wander these paths alone
Inverted cross close to heart
As we heed the call of death
And burn your soul eternally
Divine Black Erotica
And so I have awoke
Staring out into obscene skies
I see nothing but the ebony surface
That keeps me trapped in this void
Into the cell I lay, they charge
Ripping my feeble flesh off
They travel deep into the castle dark
The dripping of blood tearing away the silence
Into a dark room I am thrown
One solitary flame burns in the chamber
Hooded figures gather around
One by one the cloaks fall
6 succubus' gaze upon me
Closer and closer they approach
Such beauty of the dark
Touching this virgin skin
On through this night
Bloodied love upon lust grows
Moans and screams fill the musty air
As my final grasp is at hand...
I feel the warm clench of thighs upon my neck
Tasting all the carnal desires within her
Seeping her poison into my mouth...
I fall into the infinite abyss of Hell
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Last edited by Draconian Demon on Fri Nov 29, 2002 1:55 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 1:42 am
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see them? as in all? lol, i have like 100's of songs, i'll just put the top 4 i want to share, cause soem of them are very personal and i still won't even sing them or share them with the bands but yeah anway here ya go, by the way these aren't my "f*ck you" songs, these are pretty mellow, let me know of you want any of them
this one song i wrote was dedicated to a girl who killed herself....this is the poem she left, my song is after it, it was basicaly how i felt and kinda my reaction to it i guess it was kinda weird this song i wrote jsut flowed out of me really fast after i read her poem
“Pain in Life”
The greatest pain in life
is not to die, but to be ignored.
To lose the person you love so
much to another who doesn't care at all.
To have someone you care so about so much throw a party...
and not tell you about it.
When your favorite person on earth
neglects to invite you to his graduation.
To have people think that you don't care.
The greatest pain in life,
is not to die,
but to be forgotten.
To be left in the dust after another's great achievement.
To never get a call from a friend,
just saying "hi".
When you show someone your innermost thoughts and they laugh in your face.
For friends to always be too busy to console you when you need someone to lift your spirits.
When it seems like the only person who cares about you,
is you.
Life is full of pain,
but does it ever get better?
Will people ever care about each other,
and make time for those who are in need?
Each of us has a part to play
in this great show we call life.
Each of us has a duty to mankind
to tell our friends we love them.
If you do not care about your friends
you will not be punished.
You will simply be ignored...
forgotten...
as you have done to others.
now my reaction
(by the way my name is adam so if you see adam beside it means i wrote it)
Adam - “Dedication”
Do you know what it is like to be ignored?
Giving everything you have, being an emotion whore?
Only wanting back is a recognition
But your choice not to say hi is my deathly decision
I only wanted to be in the light sometimes
But instead I was throw away with out right sometimes
So this is how it ends for me
IÂ’ve tried but sadness I only receive
Do you know what itÂ’s like being thrown around like a doll?
Though canÂ’t fix with stitches, but trying to get back together somehow
I try to be what you expect of me
But somehow I always fail, donÂ’t need empathy
I only wanted to be in the light sometimes
But instead I was thrown away without right sometimes
So this is how it ends for me
IÂ’ve tried but sadness I only receive
I guess the only way I will be seen is through death
No one even tries, as a result my heart dies
I am walking without solitude
IÂ’ve tried but my feelings you refuse
So I give up on trying
Though you wonÂ’t care if I say IÂ’m dieing
So this is the last time I try for you
Because when I try, I always lose
I only wanted to be in the light sometimes
But instead I was thrown away without right sometimes
So this is how it ends for me
IÂ’ve tried but sadness I only receive
I guess the only way I will be seen is through death
No one even tries, as a result my heart diesÂ…..
This song is dedicated to a young girl who never had a chance to live her life
No one gave a damn about her, and no one does about me, nor maybe you
But please donÂ’t resort to killing yourself and watch out, the one closest to do it
Just might as well be you
i'll post the other 3 on 3 seperate posts on this topic
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 1:46 am
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i wrote this when my g/f who i love more than anything broke up with me (thank God we are back together!!) but yeah...
Adam - “Help Me”
I am so confused
She comes back in my life
After my emotions she abused
All that she has done
She wants me back, canÂ’t refuse
I donÂ’t really need this
But I have nothing to lose
My heart stomped on the floor
I canÂ’t really take this shit
Maybe the pills and blades
Will take away all of it
I donÂ’t know if I can trust her again
I donÂ’t know if this time I can win
Why must I keep letting her in?
My God help me
Thoughts run through my mind
I look and seek
Not knowing what to find
I just need some comfort
In my dark room trapped in time
Memories in my head
Remembering what IÂ’ve lost before
Important people close to me
My grandmother and so many more
I look down at my wrists
My veins my lifeÂ’s shrine
IÂ’ll take it all away, please God
Just let me die
I donÂ’t know if I can trust her again
I donÂ’t know if this time I can win
Why must I keep letting her in?
My God help me
And I donÂ’t know if this time
If my body will let me feel
All the pains IÂ’ve went through in my life
I think I will never heal
And I just want someone this time
Someone that wonÂ’t leave me
I need someone next to me before I die
I donÂ’t know if I can trust her again
I donÂ’t know if this time I can win
Why must I keep letting her in?
My God help me
Please my God help me
GOD!
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 1:48 am
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ahhh damn it, correction, wrong song, that song was about when she broke up with me she hurt me but she wanted me back but i have fears of letting her back.......lol this song is the reaction of when she said it was over.......ahh too many songs i get mixed up
Adam - “Too Attached”
IÂ’m so alone
I feel like I wanna die
Emotions been thrown
I canÂ’t help but sometimes cry
I look in the sky
Hoping, praying take it all away
My prayers never answered
I donÂ’t wanna live another day
What little I had has been ripped out
She stole my vary soul
She says she too attached now
She thinks we should let it go
The time I spent with her
I felt a loving warmth inside
But I will never trust again
With my emotions I flee and hide
I should have known not to be happy
Because to me it always leaves
I should have known not to wear a grin
LifeÂ’s joy and I will never ever be
What little I had has been ripped out
She stole my vary soul
She says she too attached now
She thinks we should let it go
I would get so happy
Just from hearing her name
But once again a pawn in life
It uses me in its cruel game
I donÂ’t know why I keep on trying
Because I always fall
But I guess I must keep on fighting
Until I fall once and for all
What little I had has been ripped out
She stole my vary soul
She says she too attached now
She thinks we should let it go
What little I had has been ripped out
She stole my vary soul
She says she too attached now
My reason just let me go
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:02 am
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this song is about how pretty much......like i guess you could say another person in me i can see, like a reflection of myself basicaly saying my own biggest critique is me and i know it but i can't fight it.......it's kinda confusing
Adam - “My Own Reflection”
ItÂ’s staring back at me
No hiding from what I see
ItÂ’s point blank, the failure I am
CanÂ’t take it away
Caught in the glass
I canÂ’t stand my own reflection
It pierces back at me
With someone I cannot plead
WHY?!?, get away from me
I ask it whoÂ’s pathetic of all
It answers back in a voice that isnÂ’t me
How did I put up all these walls
Too late to tear them down
They are permanent, blocking all
I canÂ’t stand my own reflection
It pierces back at me
With someone I cannot plead
WHY?!?, get away from me
I try to hide these feelings
Shut my eyes but I still see
The fire thatÂ’s inside me
Burning and raging on
The vision is now melting
No longer seeing what is wrong
I canÂ’t stand my own reflection
It pierces back at me
With someone I cannot plead
WHY?!?, get away from me
I cannot stand my own reflection
It laughs right back at me
That someone I cannot plead
WHY?!?., is that person in the mirrorÂ…
me
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:05 am
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that girls note is pretty weak...a typical teenage cry for help. Another suicide note. I feel no pity. Seems like yet another fake teenage heartbreak. It shows how immature people are if they kill themselves over another person. That just shows how weak they are.
Your poems were much better than hers.
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:12 am
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i know what you mean but i just meant i feel the same way almost but i won't resort to all that, do you really like them? i guess i concider your opinion a little high cause i dunno we kinda just bitched each other out over and over like 30 mins ago and if you liked them i guess it kinda means we are sorta getting along now lol
but we have to make a deal, no more talking about each others musical opinion caus eboth of us get fired up and yeah....so i won't say anything against your groups if you don't mine...
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:21 am
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do me a favor and explain to me what "devine black erotica" is about lol.....i mean to the normal man it coudl be taken as a bad lesbian encounter lol, but i guess it coudl kinda mean what? the deathly decisions that lust of cirtain things could cause?
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:32 am
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Heres a song I wrote...
Schism
I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them fall away
Mildewed and smoldering. Fundamental differing.
Pure intention juxtaposed will set two lovers souls in motion
Disintegrating as it goes testing our communication
The light that fueled our fire then has burned a hole between us so
We cannot see to reach an end crippling our communication.
I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them tumble down
No fault, none to blame it doesn't mean I don't desire to
Point the finger, blame the other, watch the temple topple over.
To bring the pieces back together, rediscover communication
The poetry that comes from the squaring off between,
And the circling is worth it.
Finding beauty in the dissonance.
There was a time that the pieces fit, but I watched them fall away.
Mildewed and smoldering, strangled by our coveting
I've done the math enough to know the dangers of our second guessing
Doomed to crumble unless we grow, and strengthen our communication.
Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any
Sense of compassion
Between supposed lovers/brothers
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:44 am
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lol don't be stupid violater.....by the way tool sucks because they are too way over-rated, everyone is like " OMG TOOLTOOLTOOL" and yeah
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:48 am
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its not fair to say they suck because there over rated...if you just think there music sucks, then thats fine...
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 3:08 am
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lol that's kinda what i meant, i don't like their music and plus they are too well liked for their talent lol, then again it's whatever people like so, it's their right to like it
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Draconian Demon
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2002 2:02 pm
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Stone Sour,
Your words were good. They are not my type of writing, but they are very good in their own content. I never compare writings. You really can't. My type of writing is much more different than yours, but I did like yours.
I was not impressed with the girls poem one bit. Just because someone did not invite you to their graduation party you kill yourself. WEAK. I mean, everyone feels ignored. That is life. Some people are just too weak to handle life. I hardly have any friends and am neglected from most of my family (other than my Mom, Grandma and Dave). I only have 2 great freinds. Does this mean I should kill myself? No way. It is just pretty feeble that someone would take their life some something like that.
Divine Black Erotica is about the price of lust. It is about a prisinor that gets released, and is thrown in a chamber with six succubi (female demons...very beautiful...think a hotter Nitara) in it...he than begins to give her head, and when she has an orgasam, it is actually lethal. And kills him. He paid for his lust.
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Posted: Sun Dec 01, 2002 5:22 am
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ook......lol....i am not laughing at the meaning of the song i am just suprised i kinda got the lust part of it right, i take it you think more on the erotic-dark side of things quite a bit? (no offense meant just meant as a normal honest question)
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