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Zyero
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Hey this forum lacks stories.Now all u have to do is post stories!(about mk of course!)
The Fallen Race.
Rak was sittin a corner thinking heavily about his speed.(to know who rak is and basic plot goto thread who wants to start an rpg)
While he was sitting there looking at the sky a weird star flew across space.Rak only got a glimpse of it.Rak:Herm...that star looked like it was heading to the Naz realm.The Naz race are masters of fighting! I should go there.And so Rak went off.Landing is a barren village Rak noticed it was dead.
Baruk was also there in search of the Secret Masters of the race.the Secret masters were the toughest people in the Naz realm.They could overpower Marsu.However since the realm was destroyed somehow they have vanished.
Baruk looked around in the dead village.Baruk could sense that somone was there.Rak could also tell that somone was there but he didn't show it. Rak saw a glow of light and decided to see what it was.Suddenly A strang man grabbed him and jumped in the air then landed in a forgotten well.
Baruk:Who are you? WHAT are you doing here? Well? ANWSER ME!!!
Rak got on his feet.
Rak:I am Rak.Son of Quan-Qin.Lear of DragonSkaared.
Baruk:Yea yea skip the fancy talk sonny!
Rak:Are you part of the Naz race? Rak notices his Naz like scar upon his hand.
Baruk:Wouldn't you like to know?
Rak:Your skin is worth alot of money.
Baruk suddenly srikes his face.Baruk seems flaming mad.(flaming get it?)
Rak wipes face.
Rak:Listen i'm not here for u. I'm here for the Secret Masters. I need to learn how to get better at fighting to defeat......him.....
Baruk then gets a nasty thought.
Baruk:Secret Masters eh? Sure i'll help....for a price.I want the Amult of Gods.
Rak:Whats that?
Baruk:Its a hidden amulet south of here.It countains great power. Now kid i knew this Quan-Qin guy.
Rak:he never spoke of you.
Baruk:Oh really?My name is Baruk.And urs is Rak.
Rak:Oh he has!You are very powerful!
Baruk:Why yes i am.Go get the amulet and meet me back here.
Rak gets up and climbs the ladder out of the well.
BAruk:one more thing...if you meet a guy named Marsu tell him to meet me here.
Rak nodds and runs off very excited and not thinking.Rak runs south not excepting the dangers ahead.A few weeks later.A huge temple stands into of Rak.Rak walks in. The temple in old and falling apart.
From the north entrance a person named ShadowKiller enters wanting the same thing.Shadowkiller is very mysterious and has 2 personalities.
Rak sees that stautes guard the next door.As Rak moves across the room he steps on a switch....the stautes come to life.2 of them dart at Rak.Rak manages to jump over them and he begins to transform.Rak is now Rakinishu.
He begins to attack savagely.He brings out his 4 swords.(he grows 2 extra arms) Rakinishu then does a spin attack.The stautes soon overpower him and all tackle him at once.
Ok i'm tired right now so i'lll do the next part tommorrow.
Ok right quick to explain Rak.
Name-Rak
Age-16
Realm-EarthRealm
Alliance-Good(but with vengance blood in him)
Bio:Rak is a very skilled fighter at his age.His in love with his swords.He is usally laughing and playing around when not in battle.However in training his attiude is totally diffrent.When in fighting Rak is know as Rakinishu. Rak owns a small clan called DragonSkaared. Rak used to be jsut a new member but shortly after the leader was assainated he become leader. Rak's parents were both from the outworld.When his parents found out he was Dragon Scared they left him as a baby to die. (Dragon Scar is a nasty Scar which spreads and kills quickly)Quan-Qin found him an manged to cure it.(Quan-Qin was the leader) During the cure however he caught it but lived.Quan taught Rak everything he knew.Scorpion killed Quan-Qin because he was know to have helped Shang Tsung to kill his family. Now Rak is mad and is hunting Scorpion.
now baruk.
name-Baruk
age-22
Realm-Naz(commoner a.k.a slave)
Alliance:hard to tell maybe good
Bio:Baruk was born in Naz no one is sure were it is.The commoners there are slaves in our world.He looks like a fire sub-zero. His family never really liked the Naz realm but they had no choice.When Baruk was 6 years old they began to teach him the Suziki fighting style.By 16 he had almost mastered it. Two years later he began to add things to Suziki. However Marsu crashed in the realm.Baruk was away then training. When the crashed happend he ran toward the town.........what town? Everything had been destroyed. His family was dead.Baruk went out of the realm to explore. He noticed a guy named Sub-Zero and began to wonder."If i'm so powerful then no one can hurt me.This guy looks tough though.....my next challenge" Now he is 22 he has lost few battles and eager takes on more.
Baruk is always looking for Sub-Zero and Marsu.(He wanted to kill the Naz realm )
Now Raks transform-When rak knows he can't fight it and win he transforms.(a move Quan-Qin taught him to work. Rak was born with move.)
Rak turns mean.He gets blind and has a long peice of cloth over his eyes. His swords become laser like and he grows two more arms.Rak get spikes on his back and grows fangs in his mouth.Rakinishu doubles in size and his feet morph.Rakinishu also grows a tail.
Dudes.i'm really tired see yall tomorrow with mroe of the story.And i'll introduce shadowKiller.
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2004 5:38 am
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Wow, I see your into the Fan fic ect...there is a site called http://www.mkstory.net that focues on the MK Story and fan fic. We could make a forum for it here, but it seems to be more popular there, but you are welcome to post you stuff on here.
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Does anyone know of where I can find a detailed account of the Mortal Kombat Storylines from the time of MK 1 up till the present? I wanna get caught up, I haven't paid all that much attention to the official storylines. I know bits and pieces here and there but I've never had a full account. If anyone can help me here it would be much appreciated.
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2004 9:30 am
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Yes, someone submited an MK Story timeline to my site, it goes up till about MKM/MK4 time.
goto my website: http://totalmortalkombat.alphalink.com.au/FRA.HTM
scroll down to 'TMK Tributes'
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Sweet thanks. I'm getting more into stories.I'll post the rest later.*falls back asleep*
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Ok heres the next part Of The Fallen Race.
When we left off Rak just got tackled by alot of stautes.Rak with his 4 swords does a slice'n dice and cuts one in two.Stilll there are many left.Getting anxiuos Rakinishu fires a powerful beam and they all fly off and hit the wall.The beam took some health so Rak ran past the rest.
On the North side Shadowkiller walks quitely across the room.Suddenly Shadowkiller jumps dogding a trap.KNowing the room is trap covered he creeps along the wall only to dodge another trap.
Rak turns back to normal panting akwardly.Rak notices the air isn't.....right.Rak runs on.the ground suddenly quakes and falls.Rak falls with it into a black pit.He hears shadows creeping somewere.One grabs him and tosses him in a wall.Rak gets up and closes his eyes to contrentrate.
Rak grabs one jumping and the shadow feels like a hand.......teh hand tosses him again. Only this time grabs his throat.
A cold Voice:Whooo are youuuu?
Rak gags and chokes.Finally manges to kick the hand off.
Rak:*cough*Is ur name*cough* Marsu?
A cold Voice:whyyyy?
Rak:*straitens up*Because if u r i know someone wants to see u.
A Cold Voice:ahhhhh reallyyy?whoo?
Rak:Baruk does.He is in a well in the dead village.
A cold voice:yessss i am marsuuuuuu.
Rak: let me out of here!
Marsu:*laughs* Fight me firsttttttt to seeee if ur worthyyyy.Lett me get out of thisssss formmmmmm thoughhh.*Marsu turns a blazing color and looks like a mix of elements again.
Marsu in a deeper voice:ah better now......lets go
Marsu raises his fists and they both land in a strang looking arena.The arena smelled like blood and parts of the sky were showing.There were skeletons everywere.
Marsu:Let the games begin!
Rak runs toward Marsu.....
Meanwhile Shadowkiller senses some fighting going on.
Shadowkiller:*grumbles* this is taking forever.
Shadowkiller locates the fighting and breaks a hole in the wall.He jumps in very anxious.Shadowkiller busts holes in walls to find to fighting.He hits somthing very hard and the place around him collaspes.When the smoke clears he emerges and sees somthing shiny on the ground.
ShadowKiller walks over to it and picks it up.Its the Amulet Of Gods.
Shadowkiller:so this is wear ur hiding huh?If only i knew how to use you!
He puts it in his pocket and busts holes again.This time he emerges in the battle scene.
Rak is on the floor bleeding to death and Marsu looks badly beat up.
Marsu:Well,*pant* the tables have been turned!*pant* now i can....
ShadowKilller:Hem?
Marsu look at the shadows were he is hiding.
Marsu:i know ur there come out!
Shadowkiller:You let that kid beat you up? sad.
Marsu:hehe bit of a tough time but i won!!! GET DOWN HERE!!!
Shadowkiller jumps down.Shadowkiller then suddenly attacks very fast and accurate.Marsu falls down.Shadowkiller looks at rak.Rak manages to look back up almost dead.Blood still leaks from Rak's veins.
Shadowkiller:i got an idea boy.ur almost dead right?
Rak:..........*blood*...........
Shadowkiller:yeayea so ur almost dead.Heres the deal i revive u once ur dead.And i'll give you the amulet.HOWEVER u will be much more powerful! You will be able to control ur self.
Rak dies he has no blood left.Before he died rak shook his head"yes"'
Shadowkiller smiles and uses dark magic to revive Rak.Rakis slowly appearing in theillage with amulet.
Shadowkiller:perfect.........
Shadowkiller quietly leaves.
Rak is revived.Rak feels very diffrent.Though he is powerful he is cursed.Rak feels like destroying the Earthrealm like this one.
Rak:YOU.......DID.........THIS........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rak turns around and punchs a house.Whatching it slowly burn to ashes Rak begins to think."I can kill him.....i just need to find Baruk."
Give me the amulet! shouts a voice behind him.
Rak turns around to find Baruk standing there trying not to smile.
Rak:here take it and lead me to the maters!Rak gives the amulet to baruk.
Baruk puts it on ands becomes diffrent.....Suddenly he hits Rak in his stomache.
Baruk:Go east of here in teh desert,Thats all i have to say thanks kid!
Baruk runs away.
Rak knows its a price but he must meet the masters.Rak gets up very ingured but walks in the east.
Rak sees that the desert is...made up of the blood of Naz.Over the blood that hides it is sand.....golden sand.the sand started to go away......the the blood and bones started to rise and make a monster.
1task:you must pass 3 tasks to reach the masters.I am the 1 come at me!
Rak gets in his postion and begins to attack the monster.
Ok thats 2 part.I've up dated the bios here they are.
Baruk.
Evil
Naz Realm is were he come from
age-22
Bio:Baruk was born is the Naz realm. He started his training in younger days. Howeer one day somehow the Naz race except him was destroyed. Baruk's family were slaves so he saw this a perfect chance to escape.Baruk seeks power and tough people to fight.
Once he gets the Amulet of Gods,The Secrets Of the Masters,And the Bone Wand he starts to go crazy. He stills lasts for a while until he goes completely insane.He manages to Kill Novel but then he dies...and stays dead.
Rak
Good
EarthRealm where once from.
age-16
Bio:Rak's parents were from the OutWorld.When they saw he had Dragon Scar they left hm to die. Dragon scar is a terrible scar that once you have that your dead. A good fellow named Quan-Qin saved him and caught it himself but lived.They owned a small clan called DragonSkaared.Rak was born with transformation.It transforms you into a super-cool tough guy.
While in a battle Quan-Qin was slain by Scorpion.
For a time his mission was to kill scorpion but it has change.After dying he was revived as a demon.When losing both the Bone Wand and
the Serets of Masters he feels now everyone is his enemy.Rak probly lasts the longest.Though he is finally slain by his own torment.
Marsu
Evil
Unknown
Unknown
Bio:Not much is known about him.He is a mix of all elements.Marsu just likes to kill he ha s no real reason.Marsu destroyed the Naz realm in a try to kill his brother Marsa.He succeded.
Marsu is slain probly the shortest.He has a Shadow Hand form thoug hit doesn'tsave him.He is Slain by Shadowkiller in there 2 fight.
ShadowKiller
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Shin realm is were from.
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Bio:ShadowKiller is very strong.He doesn't seek power.He used to be a merchant until struck by a beam which mutated him.He lieks to rip people off with items that he finds.ShadowKiller's name was Shaocho but since the beam hit him his 2 personalitites have been fighting.Some say his shadow looks like his former self.
ShadowKiller never dies.He can't die.However when Bio Corp. get sick of him they capture him and put him under forever toture.Thats worse than death.
Novel
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Some were between the Shin and Naz Realm.
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Bio:She was a theif in deserts for a while but soon retired after metting Rak.She has a small crush on hi.She appears and dissapears helping Rak whenever possible.
After Meeting Rak she is hunted by the Bio Corp.Novel was a spy ther but retirement wasn't a choice.After running around a while and meeting Baruk he kills her fast and quickly.
I'll add some more if nesseracy.The next part is tommorrow.After The Fallen Race is finished i may start on Shin Realm and Bio Corp.
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2004 4:24 am
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oh gosh thats big.....i'm gonnal ag this board up. WOW i didnt relize how much time that took. sorry so big 
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2004 5:06 am
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Thats great, I want to see more.
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2004 8:23 am
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| Total-MK wrote: | Wow, I see your into the Fan fic ect...there is a site called http://www.mkstory.net that focues on the MK Story and fan fic. We could make a forum for it here, but it seems to be more popular there, but you are welcome to post you stuff on here.
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That would be awsome, that would save me alot of time joining more forums, and I already joined like 7. LOL 
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Damn, I used to have it in my last school....
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2004 7:18 pm
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the next part will be almost end,i'm not really a writer but if i am then uh lol.
I always write these at nights for some reason.
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Zyero, I wish you were an adult so I could offer you a position in my writing team. I will have to acquire other writers to review the storylines for EMACI, and you, much like myself are an excellent writer. Unfortunately, due to the content, I can't legally accept your help in putting it together.
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Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2004 4:25 am
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| snake666 wrote: | | Zyero, I wish you were an adult so I could offer you a position in my writing team. I will have to acquire other writers to review the storylines for EMACI, and you, much like myself are an excellent writer. Unfortunately, due to the content, I can't legally accept your help in putting it together. |
really? sweet! i really didn't think as myself much of a writer.
I'm already getting membership thigns at my age^^Wow maybe i am good at something.
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Yeah, check out my post titled "hey check this out".
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Ok heres part3 i'm not sure if final part though.
The Fallen race.
When we last left off Rak was about to fight the 1task.
1task makes the first srike.He swings his sword(he has an arm made of bones that formed a bone sword.) toward Rak and does a blow.Rak gets up and attacks.He feels no-need to transform.Doing a punch and kick here and there Rak notices it isn't doing anything.
Meanwhile a caravan cross the loney desert.On that caravan lies a women.She looks much like Sonya but more Circus like.Her name is Novel a bandit.Beside her lie a slave,a monster.His name is Krystal.He looks very messed up when not in his ninja form.
Krystal is pulling the caravan with all his might.(its full of stolen stuff)
Novel:Hurry up! Your giving me a rash!
Krystal:Why don't i ride and hold the whip while you pull this thing.
Novel cracks the whip.
Novel:Stop complaining!Who saved your tail?
Krystal:you did.
Novel:who does all stealing while you get food!
Krystal:you do
Novel:exacly now keep moving!
Krystal mumbles:who does everything else?
Novel:eh? what was that?!
Krystal says no more and carrires on.
Rak has pulled out his swords and is doing a whirlwind.A whirlwind is where you have swords in each hand and spain around. Rak sees that it is barely working.1task fires an unexpected beam at him.It hits Rak and knocks him down.
Pretty soon 1task is firing a load of beams.All hitting Rak.He soon stops to recharge.Rak gets up having a sudden thought.1task is done charging and has fired the 1 beam.Rak hits it with his swords causeing it to hit 1task and making fall down defenceless.
Rak runs up and begins to slash him.Soon 1task is up again this with a diffrent kind of beam.The beam is know blue instead of yellow.Rak gets on fast for he remebers Quan-Qin's words of wisdom.
Quan-Qin:Always remeber the colors.For them mean diffrent things.Yellow means to hit with anything you have.Blue means to hit with both.Red means to hit with left.Green means to hit with right.Some eneimes try to trick you rak and use diffrents shades.
If your enemy fires a dark blue beam do not be fooled.And remeber black is death.If it comes hold still and let it srike you.Rak now let's off to training i will see if you can memorize the colors of death.
Rak hits the beam with both swords.The cycle countuinues until 1task stops firing beams.suddenly he fires a beam and blinds Rak.Now Rak cannot see.What beam is it?Rak does some quick thinking."If i move and its a black beam then it'll kill me! if its somthing i may live"Rak holds still.
He feels a beam hitting but bothing is happening.Rak can see again.1task is bowing to him.
1task:You have passed the first task.Now i will be transformed into a ball.Pass all three tasks and collect there remains.You will need,A ball,A stick,And some feathers.These will be used for you to enter the Secret Masters Tomb.
1task dissapears and a ball appears in Rak's hands.Something tells Rak to go West now and Rak obeys.Meanwhile some distance away from there...
Novel and Krystal still go west in search for valuebles.
Novel:what was that? She notices the ground rumbled.
Krystal:i don't know. Krystal is about to faint.
Novel:you may stop now.
Krystal stops.
Krystal:thank.............
Novel:i think it was a sandwurm.
Krystal:I"ll teach him....He changes his mind because if it havn't gotten by ,he would still be pulling it.
Novel:look over there.She points to a figure walking across the sand.
The ground trembles and quakes in.
Novel grabs on a root of a very strong plant know as Aquas.As the caravan falls Krystal grabs on Novel's legs.
Novel:OK listen! I'm gonna pull us up hang on.
Then a dart hits Krystals arms causeing him to fall in black ness. Novel claws her way up.And looks at the dart.Bio Corp. it said.
Novel:They've......followed me........here.
Novel: WHY DID YOU FOLLOW ME?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?
She makes her way across the desert wondering what to do now. Rak however has fallen asleep in a small abounded camp that he found.Novel sees a fire soon and she wonders whos there.Novel soon reaches the camp and sees no one.She makes her self a spot and falls asleep.
The next morning Rak awakes.Very hungrey he pulls out the remains of a desert rat he killed yesterday and starts to eat.Then Novel wakes up.As soon as she comes out of her spot..
Rak:Who are you!?
Novel:Who are YOU?!!?!? Novel starts to get scared that hes from the Bio Corp.
Rak:I am Rak.
Novel:Oh yeah?
Rak eyes her.
Novel: Fight me.
Rak hasn't finished breakfast but accepts.
After a very short lived battle Novel steps out of the fight.
Novel:Oh your not a Bio Spy.
Rak:What?
Novel:I used to be a spy for a Corporation called Bio Corp.
Rak:who are they?
Novel:The are a Corporation who likes to rip people on things and shoot them with lasers that forever change you.
Rak:Oh......
Novel:There from a realm called the Shin realm.
Rak:well i'm busy now i have to find the 2task.
2task:really? maybe i've found you.
Rak:what?!?!?!?!
A huge sandwurm pops out of the ground.
Rak: so your the 2task? Alright!
Novel:Let me help.
The sandwurm hits Novel hard in the ribs. Rak thinks he better transform so he does.Rakinishu pulls out his 4 swords and begins to attack. THe wurm thrashes about.Novel pulls put some daggers and begins to throw them.Rakinishu does a lighting attack.(he jumps in air and punds the ground lighting goes everywere and hits the target)2task swallows novel whole.
Rakinishu does a super whirlwind.(with 4 swords is known as"super")2task screeches with pain but doesn't show any.Rak relizes he must have a weak spot.Rakinishu begans to attack it all over without stopping. After a while of his swords getting stuck and the wurm bashing himhe finds the spot.
But a dagger sticks though him and is stuck.Novel comes out of a dagger cut hole in the wurm.2task screechs with pain and goes underground. Novel looks at rakinishu ans relizes thats her dagge stuck in him.Novel runs though and pushes it on though.(her daggers have hooks and them so you can't pull out)Rakinishu can' control himself now.
Rakinishu hits novel in the nose and knocks her out. thens he jumps at the wurm which has come out again.2task burns into ashes.
2task:you have done it.Now take the stick to the set.
Rak:*growls and snarls*
2task:unless you remeber Quan-Qin's teachings you will be killed.I know the evil the flows within you but control it! You are more powerful than it.
Rak calms down and turns to normal.
Novel keeps up.
Novel:whats up with you?
Rak:No...nothing
Novel:yeah,well i better be going.
Rak:where?
Novel:oh somewere.
Then she leaves.
Rak makes his way now north. Soon the ground rumbles and a warrior pops out of the ground.It looks very acient and old.It carries a sword and sheild.
3task:fight me young one of 2 minds!
Rak:alright your the final one!!!!
The fight begins.Rak cannot transform because he knows he will lose control.3task is beating Rak up horribly.
3task:you should've been more expperianced.
3task raises sword cut off Rak's head.Suddenly the 3task dies.
A voice:you let your guard down.....
Rak:Baruk?!
Baruk:oh nice! I have an annoucer haha!!!
Rak:what are you doing here?
Baruk:What do you think.
The feathers appear. Rak gets up to claim them but they float to Baruk. Rak stick and ball also float to him as well.
Rak:Whats going on?
Baruk:I'm entering the tomb.Stupid little monkey!
Rak'???????????????
Baruk:You need 3 items to enter dummy!! Bone Wand,Amulet of Gods,Book of Ye, and i have them.
Rak:you...*rak is too beat up to jump him*
Baruk:ha!!! monkey!!!!!!! now move it or lose it!
Rak stays in front of the tomb.
Baruk jumps down and pushes him.
Baruk:They day has come!!!!
Baruk starts putting the items in their slots..................
And its 10:30 here. Tired*yawn* the final part will be tommorrow.If ya want i can make a new story on this post OR start a new one yall's vote. cya tomorrow!
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