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Zyero
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 3:29 am
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^^ this is gonna be COOL! ok starting tommorrow there will be my story called Outsiders(might change to outsiderz though) Ok heres the deal theres peoples with powers.(like dbz)I'll do chars tomorrow.I have no pics of nuttin so forget that 
I hope people post in this.(not this post but the non fan fict)
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Zyero
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OK here we go!
Spi was sitting on a rock near the ocean wonder various things."Where do we come from? Why did we come? Who made us?" All in 1 day his questions were answered. Spi heard a crash in the nearby island. He was very adventurous. So he flew to it.
The lsland was very small and deserted. The ship was small and round. Then a man came out. He was very bulky and had emerald eyes. His hair was spiky and black. He look dangerous. The armor he wore only coverd his chest, hands, part of his legs,(to knee) and his foot.
Man:Is this Terra?(Terra is like Earth is this)
Spi:Why? Who are you?
Spi landed on the ground in front of the stranger.
Man:Ah..so you are a Dragon are you? I am Zar.
Spi:Whats a Dragon? Explain!
Zar: Our race was created by Muha. My job is two find them all. You come from a planet thats very far away. You were supposed to be a soldier of kllling but everythign went wrong. A metor hit and off flew the Dragons.
Spi: So your like me? Why should i trust you?
Zar: Because we are the same kinda. You have ruby eyes.
Spi knew this was true. Spi wasn't has bulky as Zar but his hair was red and spikey. Spi wore clothers that just looked like armor. Spi examanied Zar. Knowing he was right spi didn't want to go. He had a mission and he wasn't goign to leave without doing it.
Spi:No, not yet.
Zar: Foolish boy. No is not an option.
Spikes suddenly grow on Zar's armor. Zar charges at Spi. Spi manges to fly away from him.Zar fires a beam that tracks. Spi tries to fly at Zar but he is too fast.The beam hits and hurts Spi a little.Spi notices he is paralzyed.
Zar:Your choice. I can't kill you. Other wise i would.
Spi:...............................*a mean look goes on his face
*CRASH* The shard countaining Spi breaks.He flies in the air and firest non-stop beams.Zar allows them to hit. Zar then fires a beam made of all the little oens. However Zar added some energy to it. Spi tries to hold the beam but gets overwhelmed. Spi is now charging towards Zar.
Zar:Higno misuno sini mu ha!!!!
Zar fingers turns to bits of crystal and they start to fire. 1 by 1 they hit Spi. Spi starts to bleed from his mouth,eyes,arms,legs. Bits of crystal are very deadly.Spi then does a circle movement with his arms and theres three of him. All in a dog fight,Zar and 3 Spis fight.
Blood sprays everywere with each blow. Zar now has a new plan.Forgetting his mission and to into the fight to remeber he grews spikes on his hands. Now normal spikes but bits of crystal. It seems to be the weakness of ruby.Now there is only 1 spi. Now Zar will try to kill him.....any dragon will die if they get hit hard enough in the eyes.
Now Zar charges his hands. Spi knowing nothing about himself thinka hes chaging a beam. Spi prepares to refelct a beam. Zar's hands re glowing a very strang green color. Then so quickly he teleports in front of Spi and hits him in his eyes. Very red blood flies everywere. Spi falls in the sea below were he was floating. The sea turns red.
Zar not caring anymroe about the mission decides to quite.....without telling anyone. Zar thoughts"Fool. I am the toughest. Now for the Sapphire" Zar flies off. A couple of minutes later another one appears at the site. The guy has sapphire eyes. His hair is long and a mix of a dark brown and light blue.
The man wears spikey armor all around him. His name is Ase( its said like ace) Ase looks at the blood stains around him. Ase notices the ship. He also noted the water is red with blood. Ase thoughts"Someone was fighting here. Ruby is down. Perhaps maybe he was stupid. Ah well. I must find emerald before he kills someone else.
ASe also is very diffrent he is tall and has pointy ears. He doesn't usally save people but Dragon are rare.
Ase:Szeron! So!
After he says thoughs words a huge temal comes out of the grounds. A temal is a HUGE lizard with wings. However it only has 2 feet. Its wings are for flying and swimming. When on land they run on there feet very fast. Somtimes they use their wings for a boast.
Ase: Ok Alpha..track Emerald.
Alpha:Ry@# kaa#
ASe:Go there then and hurry!!!!
Ase jumps on the temal's back and hangs on to the spikes.Alpha flies away in a hurry. Meanwhile Zar explores the area he is in. Zar is in a forest. Whispers surround Zar. The wind seems to talk. The trees slumber and the moon is magic. Zar senses tell him that somone is there.
Close by near Zar is diamond. He has white hair that is long but 2 strands hang over his ears. He is know as Spinx. Spinx has no ears for they were cut off in a battle. He isn't old but he is powerful. Spinx has an evil heart when he fights but a good heart when not fighting.
He has many friends. Right now a human Yama is tagging with him. Yama is his trainee.
Yama:OK so....Were hunting dragons? Well thats sounds nice.
Spinx:You crybaby. He have to.(they somtimes call eahc other names.)
Yama:Yeah? Won't don't we just get drunk and get some girlfriends?
Spinx:Then you go do that. Save me a hot one!
Yama is lost. He never pays attention to where his going. He makes up a excuse.
Yama:Well you already have a girlfriend.
Spinx did have a girlfriend.They were gonna get married to in a week. Spinx tries to make up an excuse to prove hes right.
Spinx:I ment a beer!
Yama:Rightttttt
Spinx:shhhh! i hear somthing.
Both of them get on the ground.
Zar: Excuse me.
He is talking where yama an spinx are trying to hide. Spinx and yama get up knowing that is unless to hide. Spinx notices his eyes and gets serious. Yama gets ready to run. He can't control his powers yet. Thats why Spinx's girlfriend is afraid of him.
Spinx:Your hear to kill me aren't you? I've already sensed that ruby is dead.
Zar:You and your peepsqueek can die 2 ways. Would you like the forest to be red? Or the ground? Your choice.
Yama acts tuff.
Yama: Yeah? Well dragon i see you think your tough!
Yama prepares to fight.
Zar:You have a sense of humor. Go get me a beer why don't you?(he read yama's mind)
Spinx:He has nothing to do with this. Yama go now. This fight is mine.
Yama nods are tries to fly off but fails. so instead he runs in a totally diffrent direction. Zar tries to speak but is broken by an eerie silence. Spinx is now showing how truly powerful he is. He is charging up.
Spinx nows glows a white. Hi hair grows longer. A staff appears in his hands. His muscles grew a little. His eyes are a blinding white. A long robe now surrounds him.However he was blind but very good secnes. The fight begins.
In the dead land known as the Netherrealm Spi has gotten lost. Being veyr curiuos he went in a diffrent direction. He ended up in a planet just for dead people.
Yama has made it out of the forest.(super speed yeah!) Yama spots somthing strang on the ground. He takes a closer look. After a while of examaning it he relizes its living. The thing grew. It dug a hole into Terra's core. Little monsters began to pop out. Yama begin fights the little creatures.
However the creatures manage to grab him and chain him up on a board. A monster then comes out of the ground. Claiming that he is Muha. Muha looked like he was made by cords. His head was long. Muha then spoke a diffrent language and floated away.
The crains on Yama begin to be pulled. These chains sucked Yama's energy so what could he do? At first he didn't hurt but then. Yama felt his arms and legs being pulled off.Yama screamed with pain. Still the little monsters did not let go. They looked like min versions of Muha. Of course! These were his parts.
Yama could no longer move his arms or legs. Finally with one yank,Yama had died. His two arms outstretched and his legs were also detachted. It look very yummy. His arms and legs not on him. Just a body. The cut off hos head for supper. The blood was everywere. When you walk you wouls hear a *splash*.
Spinx felt this sudden death. Angrey now but blinded. Sharp beams and punches were being tossed. Zar lifted his arms and began to charge a beam.
In the distance Ase and Alpha were closing in. There plan was to enter the fight as diamonds ally.Alpha would fly away and ASe would jump off. If they won he would explain. If they lost he would be mad. The plan took action. Alpha flied on. Ase enterd the fight. Somhow Spinx knew it was an ally.
Zar still lifting his hands and not attacking and a smile on his face.
Ase:Now is our chance!
Spinx: Yes,How about Hxzeryo?
Ase:No too long.Lets do the Hexfiyero.
So it was agreed. They powered up there fullest and fly far away. Then flew straight into each other. They and mixed in. They had become Zon. When any dragons mix they become zons. Very powerful creatures. Only certain dragons can become one though.
So Zon began charging a beam too. Zar had already finished. Sucking all of his own life he fired the beam. However not at Zon but at Terra. The beam went right through the ground without hurting anyone. The ground rumbled and then stopped.
Zar:You have lost*pant* True i might die. But you cannot win.
Zon lost patince and fired Blood Explostion.When Zar touched it he bleed. Suprisling he let it it and kill him. Zon turned back to normal also panting. Why you may ask? When a Zon your health is being leeched to the enimey.
ASe:thats not good.
Spinx:How come we stop it?
Ase:I don't know but we must try.
Spinx: I fear worse.
Ase: Do not worry. Lets find a way first.
The beam Zar had firedWAs a Kannom beam. It entered a planet's core. It doesn't hurt anything. Overtime it messes up the core. Then it explodes. However no one can escape the planet. People can enter but can't exit.
It creates a sheild. However it almsot kills the perosn who threw it. Zar is dead? so cheesy! Not really....
The Blood Explostion did hit. The only thing they don't knew is Zar's power. If he is almsot dead he may teleport anywere he wants. Yes anywere,even a diffrent planet.
To end this Spi and Yamma are on the same dead planet......learning.
Zar is training....he wants revenge.
Ase and Spinx are training also.......to find a way to stop the beam.
The next chapter.....Dead Skaared.
Terra blows up.
Zar enters the dead world.
A huge and much better fights go on.
Characters-
name-Spi
Age-17
powerlevel-10
Bio-Spi never knew who he was or anything. Untill the day he is killed. He is ruby. His eyes are ruby. He has to power to heal.
name-Ase
age-29
powerlevel-18
Bio:Ase knew who he was. He saved Alpha one day by bounty hunters. Ever since they've been buddies. But when alpha dies Ase goes crazy. He is sapphire.He has the power to easily blow up planets.
name-Zar
age-33
powerlevel-30
ZAr served Muha for a while killing and capturing people. Zar is very powerful but somehow gultiy of it,. He has the power to teleport where ever he wants when hes almsot dead,he is emerald.
name-Muha
age-101
powerlevel-55
An unknown alein. He looks like he is made up of cords. All we known he hates dragons.
name-Yama
age-24
powerlevel-5
He is weak and doesn't know much. Aftermeeting Spinx they become friends. Yama is a normal everyday terran but there is somthing strang about him.
name-Spinx
age-26
powerlevel-20
He ahs always been msyterious until he meet yama. Yama is his trainee but can be right somtimes. Spinx is diamond. He has the power to read midns and feelings.
name-Alpha
age-1000
powerlevel-1000
Even though the temal has the hightest power level ever known they can't fight. Whoch is something very strang about them. They can be killed easy though....
Ok theres my story. If you have any questions pm me or post on this forum. About the rating. Which is the best 1 or 5? All the ratings on sties are diffrent. I think 5.
OK what do you'll think? Any suggestions on next?
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You can't help if I'm God. I am the Shadow Killar. Bow down to me. I am the Theif. I am Fear. I am Darkness. Prepare to die.
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