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DeathStrikesBack
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2002 8:00 pm
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Eh. i dont know if anyone else has done this before but I was kinda out of whack this morning. And i decided to type this up and and post it, so here ya go, Battle Fic: Sub Zero Vs Scorpion
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He Stumbled into the arena, his face scarred, his suit bloody. His arms were imbued with ice down to his hands. He wore an amulet on his shoulder as a cold mist drew off him into the air. He could have been seen from 20 miles away. One of the most recognizable figures of Mortal Kombat had arrived. The name drew hope in some and fear in others. And whispered through many ears was the name. he was Sub Zero.
One the opposite side of the arena, in the shadows. White eyes flickered with a small flame of hatred. The pupils were dead and so was his heart. He flexed his arm and clenches his fist at the site of his rival. His head lashed to the left, and the yellow ninja scarf that dangle from the back of his mask follow. No one was close to this man, and soon, the one in Blue, Sub Zero. Would be dead because of him. Named after the insect where its poison can kill, he had the reflexes of one. His name, Scorpion.
Sub Zero let his voice rang across the arena
Sub Zero: Scorpion! You know who your families true murderer is! So what do you have with me!?
Sub Zero stood with his feet planted like he was preparing for a hurricane.
A feud that has lasted three generations!!
Scorpion, shouted back, Revealing his true form. The yellow ninja.
At those words both ninjas dashed across the arena at each other. Both of them leapt into the air, flying through it like a knife, Sub Zero stuck his foot out and it sunk it Scorpions side. They both landed with a thud, Scorpion was keeled over, Sub Zero walked over to him to bring his foot down into his back.
As Sub Zeros foot came down Scorpion reached his hand up and grabbed his foot and threw his fist right at Sub Zeros face. The hit struck and Scorpion could feel his knuckles crack and Sub Zeros jaw shatter from the blow. Sub Zero through a punch back but Scorpion blocked it with his forearm and grabbed Sub Zero;s shoulder, whirling him around and throwing him.
Sub Zero jumped back up and brushed his chin with his hand a felt blood slowly seeping through the mask, he glanced up to see scorpion charge him. Sub Zero leapt up and kicked Scorpion in the face with a round house kick, sending scorpion reeling from the blow. Sub Zero followed up with two punches to the jaw and one right into the stomach, He reached from Scorpions throat and grit through his teeth as he grabbed hold.
Sub :You have no fight with me, you know your murderer.
But he could still see the hatred in Scorpions eyes.
As he was distracted Scorpion kicked him in the knee, causing Sub Zero to drop him, He picked him up and slammed him face first into the ground. He slammed his foot into Sub Zeros back and slowly began to grind it into his spine.
Liar He whispered.
Sub Zero reached behind his back and grabbed Scorpions foot. He rolled over bring Scorpion down to the ground with him. Sub Zero jumped up and rolled backwards.
He Saw Scorpion stand up and lean on his back right leg. He Waved his hand in front of him.
Oh Sub Zero had seen this move before, and right as the thought struck him, He saw the spear headed towards him.
GET OVER HERE!!!!!!
Sub Zero held his arm up to block, the spear struck his arm and sunk in, But on reflex he twirled the rope around his arm and pulled back, Causing Scorpion to lose balance and fly towards him. Scorpions flying body tackled Sub Zero and brought them both close to the edge of the arena. Sub Zero got up at the same time as Scorpion and Attempted to kick him in the side of the head.
Scorpion grabbed his foot and threw Sub Zero into the wall and Disappeared. He Re appeared behind Sub Zero and attempted to punch him. He saw something new in Sub Zeros eyes. Something he had never seen before.
Hatred.
Sub Zero Brought his fist into Scorpions face repeatedly and grabbed him, he caused a small chunk of ice to appear on his fist and repeatedly brought it towards him. He Finally grabbed scorpion and flung him over the side of the arena, hearing scorpions body fall towards the hard ground below.
Sub Zero wheezed and coughed, and finally got up.
He then brought his right hand down his chest and then across his shoulders.
We shall meet again, ninja
he walked out of the arena.
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well, thats the end, I hope you enjoyed. Eh, I might do another one of these. Any Suggestions? Comments? Questions? Criticisms?
I just noticed that this board cannot handle Qoutation Marks or Apostrophies with out putting numbers.
So my Dialogue looks Screwed
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Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2002 11:37 pm
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Fanfics are very intresting, yours was. So keep some coming.
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 2:03 am
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love it man,make Scorp win please 
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DeathStrikesBack
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 2:39 am
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lol, thanks for the replys guys. i was expecting a flame bomb 
heh, now i need to think of the next match, but im leaning on noob vs someone.
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 1:45 pm
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That was a cool battle, I hope someone else gets involved in it (and dies!!!)!!!
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icewinddale1
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 5:42 pm
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Another Sub-Zero vs Scorpion...Love it!!! :mrgreen:
If you do anymore to the story put a twist in it because everyone else writes Scorpion wins in theirs 
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DeathStrikesBack
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 6:00 pm
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naw, my writing isnt biased towards the fan favorate, and i also dont lean it towards my personal favorate either.
and i am planning on cont scorp vs sub, but right now im working on another fight other than them
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 6:04 pm
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Great keep them coming :mrgreen: the last fan fic I read other than yours was on Saturday and that was Tommy Drake's 'Through a Lizard's Eyes' (a Reptile, Kameleon, Quan Chi and Mavado story)
Hopefully there will be more fan fic tomorrow
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 6:30 pm
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DeathStrikesBack- A very, well written battle scene. Great job
Hopefully, you've started on that next one- the more you do, the better you'll become and you'll learn new things about writing a good story.
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2002 6:44 pm
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Very nice work!!
 
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Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2002 12:57 am
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That story was really cool. You wrote with a lot of detail!
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Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2002 6:14 pm
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yeah i think so too
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Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2002 7:09 pm
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It's good to see someone else but Scorpion winning!
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