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Lord Freeze
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 2:49 am
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Here's part 4, this has the most action so far.
The Dragon Amulet-Part 4
“NOOOOOOO!!!” Sub screamed as loud as he could. He made an ice blast between his hands, then shot it at the guard that knocked Frost off the edge. He was frozen, so Sub jumped over to him and punched off his head. One of the last three guard went over and kicked Gaia in the stomach, did a back handspring, then jumped forward and tackled her onto the edge of the roof. The guard was about to kick her off, but Hydro grabbed his foot and pulled him off the edge.
One of the other two guards kicked Gaia off the edge. Hydro tried to grab her hand, but missed. Hydro quickly turned his head in shock. He knew he had failed to save his companionÂ’s life. Sub froze the roof where the two guards stood, and they slipped off the edge, plummeting to their deaths at the jagged rocks below. Sub reached over to grab HydroÂ’s hand, and he pulled him up. To his amazement, Frost was clutching on to HydroÂ’s feet.
“Frost! Your alive!” Sub said with joy.
“ Yeah. I almost died though. Hydro tried to grab my hand, but since I was falling too fast. I slipped, but then I grabbed his feet and hung there. Is Gaia okay?! I saw her fall off the edge!”
Hydro and Sub looked down at the roof.
“I ‘m not dead yet!” Said Gaia. They looked over the edge to see that she was holding onto a branch sticking out of the cliff’s side. She made little handholds jut out of the cliff as she started to climb up. She went up to the window Hydro was trying to open, and opened the lock. All four of them climbed in through the window. Hydro closed the window as he entered last. The room was dimly lit by the moon reflecting the sun’s light. Hydro started to go to the far wall. Sub took the right wall, and Frost went to the left one. Gaia stood next to the window, scanning the room with what minimal sight she could muster. Suddenly, the room was lit up by candles all over the wall. A door burst open on the right wall. The door opened in such a way that whoever looked through could not see Sub, for he was behind it.
Two men with bows walked in, followed by a man with a sword who stood in front of a man with a golden staff. The men with arrows shot two arrows at Gaia. She dodged one, but the other hit her square in the chest. She stumbled backwards, hit the window so hard, that it opened up, she fell out, then the window closed. The two men fitted more arrows to there bows, than shot at Frost. Frost froze the arrows, so they broke into pieces before they hit her. Hydro shot a blast of water at the two men, knocking them unconscious against the wall. The man with the sword walked up to Hydro, and made a clean cut in his left arm.
“RUN!” Hydro yelled. He ran over to the window, opened it, then flipped up to the roof. You could hear him running across the roof. Two yells were to be heard. Then two bodies were to be seen falling off the roof through the window.
“Who are you? What are you doing in my house.” Said the man with the golden staff. Sub looked out from behind the door. The man was talking to Frost.
“ Have you come to steal my dragon amulet? Well it is too late. It was relocated an hour ago. Kenso, FINISH HER!” The man with the sword raised it above his head, and started to slice downwards. Sub ran over, grabbed Frost, then jumped through the window
Shards of glass fell all around them. Sub made a slide of ice, so it could ease their way into the water that was past the rocks. They fell in with a splash. They looked back up at the house, and heard a scream. A body fell down into the water between them. Sub and Frost stuck out their hands, waiting for the body to float up. The back of a person showed above the water. Sub-Zero turned it over, to see HydroÂ’s face.
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 3:48 am
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Cool story. Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 3:48 pm
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Cool Fanfic Lord Freeze
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Lord Freeze
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 4:15 pm
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This post was pointless, sorry.
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icewinddale1
The Winter Witch
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 6:53 pm
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Excellent I want to print it out!!! (I only print out my favorites)
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So fair... yet so cold... like a morning of pale spring still clinging to winter's chill (Grima Wormtongue)
In the depths of Winter I finally learned that within me there lay an invinsible summer (Albert Camus)
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 10:44 pm
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Yeah, once you finish all the parts, put them together on 1big post so we can read it again continuasly(?sp)
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Lord Freeze
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 2:05 am
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Here is the fifth part. Very dramatic. 
The Dragon Amulet-Part 5
“Oh my god!” Frost screamed aloud. “ We have to get him to shore! Now!” Frost attempted to grab Hydro’s left hand to pull him to shore, but she missed. She lifted his arm above the water so she could see it, but to her shock, it wasn’t there.
“Oh god!” Frost said. She grabbed Hydro by the left arm, and Sub grabbed the left. They swam about one mile out of the cove they were in. They reached a sandy beach, and crawled ashore.
“We have to wrap his arm with something to stop blood flow to his wrist.” Frost began to unzip the top part of her suit.
“ Uhh, Frost? What are you doing?” Sub asked, his voice cracked a little.
“I have some bandages on the back of my suit. I have to unzip the top part to gain access to them.” She turned away, so Sub could only see her back. She zipped her suit back up, and turned around with some white bandages.
“ Here, use these to wrap around his wrist.” Frost began to tie one around Hydro’s bicep and triceps. Sub tied his around Hydro’s wrist.
“ There.” Frost said.
“ Frost, I think I saw a forest a little inland. We should take shelter their. It looks like it’s going to rain, and those guards are going to be searching for us.”
Sub-Zero and Frost picked up Hydro and started to walk inland. After about 20 minutes, they reached the first part of the forest. It consisted of a few dead trees and some shrubs.
“ Look,” said Sub, “there are a grove of trees over there. Lets go.” They marched over to the trees, and went into the middle. You could begin to hear thunder clouds in the distance. Then it started to pour down rain.
“Frost! We have to find higher ground!” Yelled Sub
“What? I can’t here you!” Frost yelled back. Deafening claps of thunder were heard above them. Then a different sound was heard. It started out as a low rumble, then became a screaming roar. Frost looked towards the shore.
“TIDAL WAVE!” She screamed. Sub looked over an saw it. “Were not going to make it!!” Frost said in a low voice. She grabbed Hydro and started to struggle to get behind a tree. Sub walked towards the tidal wave, being more calm then anyone could be in this situation. The rain that fell around him began to freeze, turning into hail.
“SUB-ZERO!” Screamed Frost as she looked back at him. Sub turned back, looking at her. Frost went wide eyed. She knew what he was going to do. Sub turned back to the tidal wave, which was about 100 feet in front of him. It stood 150 feet tall, and as wide as the eye could see. Sub stood there calmly, surrounded by a pile of ice. He stuck his hands out, and his eyes turned a brilliant blue. The tidal wave was now 50 feet in front of him. A blue transparent ball began to form between his outstretched hands. The tidal wave was 25 feet away. Sub put his hands above his head. The tidal wave was now 15 feet in front of him.
Sub stuck his hands out in front of him and yelled a godly roar.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!” A huge concentrated blast of ice shot out of Sub-Zero‘ s hands. Sub was consumed by the force of the blast, as he froze the whole tidal wave. The wave slowly fell over Sub. The wave continued to freeze, then was frozen completely.
Frost looked out from behind the tree. She was shocked to see that the wave stopped 20 feet behind her. It was frozen, and shone a glistening silvery blue.
“Sub?” Frost said.\0my better fights, so if you guy
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 2:12 am
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Good job Lord Freeze
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Lord Freeze
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 7:56 pm
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I won't be able to post the next part of the story for a few days, cuz I have a friend visiting from out of town. I also got to get ready for school.(DAMNITTTT!!!!!)))))))
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icewinddale1
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 8:17 pm
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What I never get ready til the night before
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His approach will be as silent as new fallen snow...his attack as fierce as winter's blizzard...his devastation as brutal as winter's relentless chill...he is complete (Lin Kuei Grandmaster)
So fair... yet so cold... like a morning of pale spring still clinging to winter's chill (Grima Wormtongue)
In the depths of Winter I finally learned that within me there lay an invinsible summer (Albert Camus)
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 8:32 pm
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I wish i could do that  But my parents make me! Also, they wont let me go over to anyones house till both my sprained wrists get better. But they're pretty much healed now.
Good work freezy pop
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 8:45 pm
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Cool Fanfic! Keep it comin. heh, and for all those who don't know, never stand infront of a tital wave thinking you can freeze it. hehe.
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Amphibious
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Posted: Fri Aug 23, 2002 4:38 pm
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Awsome story!
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