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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 1:33 am
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Prologue
"And they fear death. Or they fear Onaga. But I know that he is coming. I know his power. There are those who try to immatate his power but dont come close. The realms under the rules of Mortal Kombat have many who cheat death. Only one of these people will not suffer the wrath of him. He comes from the depths of Dark Realm out of the orders of Death to bring destruction.
The Wraith Master, Destroyer of Souls, is coming... None who break the rule of death shall escape..." - GrandMaster of the Order of Time
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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 1:47 am
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Chapter 1
Death of Onaga
The Wraith Master came to his first victom. Onaga was first because he was also against the Rulers of these Realm. Onaga, like other, has broken the Death Rule.
Onaga was ready to fight. Onaga tried to grab Wraith Master but his claws went staight throught the cloak.
The Wraith Master raised his Scythe and struck at Onaga.
Onaga was unharmed physicoly but did not move as the Wraith Master left. He was destroyed. Onaga, the Dragon King, was not dead, but his spirit was obliterated.
Such is the fate of those who cheat Death.
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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 11:08 am
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it's pretty good so far..  keep it up
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thank you Scorpion Master...
Chapter 2
Johnny Cage at Studio 21
After the end of Onaga, all of his mind slaves were free and on the run. But as the others joined the celebration, the movie star, Johnny Cage, could not shake the fealing something was watching him.
After two months of running Johnny decided to face his stalker head on. He had gone to the studio where he shot his first movie, Studio 21. "At least if I die I'll be at the place where my life really started." he said.
"This will not be a place of death, but it will be your end." The Wraith Master had entered the studio.
"You may just be the ugliest thing I have ever seen," Johnny said. (My Avatar is what the Wraith Master Looks like).
Though Cage was good he could not land a punch. It almost seemed as though he wasn't there. But Cage didn't want to take any chances at the scythe not being real. He dodge every time but the Wraith Master was fast and gained speed every second. Cage was not going to last long.
He was right. The Wraith Master gave a asmall touch to Johnny. It was enough.
Johnny Cage was gone.
And you think it's over? You are wrong...
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Chapter 3
Mileena and Baraka
After Onaga was found lifeless, Mileena and Baraka began a private war with eachother. If Mileena wins in Mortal Kombat she will gain Baraka's rank and armies. If Baraka wins, he gets Mileena as his mate. But neither shall get their prize for Mileena may live now but she has died before.
In the Living Forest, the two battle for hours.
The Wraith Master did not wait for the end of the match. He used speed to strike Mileena.
"And as for he who resurected her, you shall get the same same fate."
Baraka however had a chance but his arm blade was useless as the Wraith Master raised his scythe.
Baraka and Mileena suffer the fate beyond death...
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Chapter 4
Noob Saibot... Nuff Said
This was going to be difucult for the Wraith Master. The old Sub-Zero had come out of his dead demention as Noob Saibot, a demon. Demons could actually cause injury to the Wraith Master.
Noob Saibot and his follower, Smoke, new a battle was upon the area. They could see their opponent coming and Noob could see the small amount of fear in his eyes. But Noob knows the legend of the Wraith Master, and had the same fear as the Wraith Master.
The Wraith Master wasted no time. His scythe missed Saibot. Saibot struck at the Wraith Master. It was a fatal blow but the Wraith Master did not stop for anything. Raising his scythe, Wraith Master felt more pain. Noob had a great speed to him. He had struck 18 times already. The Wraith Master was dead. All that was left of him was his robe and his scythe. Noob Saibot took the scythe ane left the robe...
The End... or is it?
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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 8:51 pm
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its a good story i hope you can think of a way to makie it longer
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 10:20 pm
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| zero wrote: | | its a good story i hope you can think of a way to makie it longer |
Why do you think I said or is it?
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 10:22 pm
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but i do need a more detail in the future...
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 11:27 pm
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well anyway i cant wait until you post the next chapter and dont rush your self make it good
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Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 6:23 pm
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I am starting on the sequel which will be called The Wraith War
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Well i like the idea but yea you need to make it longer and more detailed.
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