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BottledMalice
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 6:21 am
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Hello everyone. I am a new member to these forums and just thought I would post a short little intro to a story I was going to write but never did. If enough of you like the intro, I will most definitely finish the story. So please, feel free to flame or praise.
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Prelude:
The very air around them seemed to grow colder, as if some amazingly unexpected cold front was sweeping through the lands around them. The guards turned to one another, each taking the others’ visible breath as recognition that the air had indeed grown colder, and that it was not a figment of their imagination. A nervous look crept upon their faces as their eyes darted around, trying to find any hint of movement around them.
“What foul magic is out there!?” one of the men shouted. Only the wind replied through the rustling trees. For a long moment there was an eerie silence, until a figure slowly began to emerge from the woods, eyes glowing a brilliant blue. His attire was fit for that of a master warrior- a Grandmaster. Only as he drew closer did the men begin to realize the figure for what it was. It was Sub-Zero. The two guards instinctively reached for their swords. They felt nothing but an icy hilt that would not budge from its frozen sheath. A feeling of helplessness and the inevitability of death washed over the guards then.
They had no choice but to attack. The men charged, one sweeping low and another kicking high with a spin kick. Sub-Zero, the greatest warrior of the Lin Kuei clan, simply fell back, avoiding both attacks as the sweep passed underneath him as he was falling, and the high kick just missing his face. He landed squarely on his shoulder blades and in one fluid motion, kipped back up to his feet and kicked out, hitting the sweeping guard with a beautifully placed savate kick to the side of the head, dropping him with a broken neck.
The remaining man charged at the Kori Warrior with a furious barrage of kicks and punches, each one brilliantly blocked and countered by the ninja. Sub Zero then caught the guards thrusting fist in the palm of his hand. The man desperately tried to pull away as ice began to consume his arm, creeping slowly up the length of it. With a lightning-quick spinning roundhouse, Sub-Zero dismembered the arm, sending it shattering to the ground. The guard screamed, not in pain, for he felt none due to the nerve endings being frozen, but in pure horror of the grotesque image of his shattered arm. He dropped to his knees and begged for mercy. Sub-Zero stood menacingly, his eyes now pure white again, a smoke-like frost permeating from his clenched fists. His breathing was rhythmic…calm…cold.
The warrior slowly turned away, seemingly granting the man his mercy. He hadn’t taken but three steps before he whipped around, eyes glowing that furious blue again and delivering a kick to the guard that caved his chest in. The crack of breast plate and bone echoed throughout the secluded area as the man flew ten feet from his previous position, quite dead.
Sub-Zero then turned towards the ominous gates that laid clearly in his path. No mere mortal could have broken through the iron bars. But he was no mere mortal. He grasped one of the bars with his left hand, quickly covering the gate in ice and shattering through it with his right. He slowly walked through the opening, all the while staying very alert to his surroundings…
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"Some of the worst things imaginable were done with the best intentions."
-Dr. Alan Grant, Jurassic Park III
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Wraith Master
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 4:07 pm
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its good but its sounds like something the old Sub-Zero(Noob Saibot) would do and not our Sub-Zero, Lin Kuei Grandmaster of Good, would do...
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Snake-Scale
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 10:55 pm
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Dude that was freakin awsome,9.7/10,Man you have to finish it.
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