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Wraith Master
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Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 11:47 pm
Post subject: The Wraith Wars: Wraith Master Sequal |
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The Wraith Wars
Prologue
Death has come to he who is beyond death. The Master of Wraiths was defeated at the hands of the demon Noob Saibot. The turmoil that came after was worse. The Wraiths fought for the right to be the Master. There were no armies in their war, only single wraiths fighting amongst themselves. If this chaos continued, the darkness would break out, and none would know peace again... Master Adoy of the Academy of Life.
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May all suffer in hell
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NickReil
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 11:32 pm
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I don't mean to sound nasty or angry or like a Jackass, but isn't that a little short?
I know it's only the Prologue, but it just doesn't seem long enough tp me. It seems like a mere thought of what could be written.
It's good, but the only advice I could offer you is to stretch it out to the max. Describe every little detail.
But if this is what you were going for then, its great.
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