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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 11:15 pm
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maybe about her dying then getting resurreced by shinnok and being able to read kitanas mind ill think of more ideas later
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 5:51 am
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Okay it seems that they are several mistakes in my story. I will do a rewrite and edit the stories. Is that okay to everyone who reads these stories? I really want this to be as accurate as possible and I want this to be more factual as well.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 12:30 pm
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12/10 a brilliant story
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Jay
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:53 am
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Okay, I have finished the editing. To save some re-reading I will say what has been changed. Kitana has been raised to believe she was an assassin for Kahn and on her own served him with no spells. But...to add more realism I had Shang Tsung cast a spell to have Kitana forget most of the major memories of Kitana's parents. I also changed the leaving to earthrealm concepts. MK2 takes place in Outworld, so there is no realm switch in the story..yet. If any of you find any mistake (still) then let me know. Or correct me about any edits or re-writes in the story. and again, opinions and criticsm is greatly appreciated.
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Jay its great to see you're concerned with the accurcy of the MK storyline alot of fan fic writers usually don't bother
Reading great stuff like this makes me want to write again 
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 4:29 am
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"Jay its great to see you're concerned with the accurcy of the MK storyline alot of fan fic writers usually don't bother
Reading great stuff like this makes me want to write again"
Since i am writing a more in-depth background of Mileena, i wanted this to be very accurate and not contradicting to the MK storyline.
oh and by the way, I would love to read some of your fanfiction!
I would also like to add that I have added titles to each individual parts.
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Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 1:08 pm
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10/10!
One flaw though: Mileena doesn't learn of her Tarkatan heritage until Kitanas MKG ending... but apart from that, its perfect!
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if you can give me some more solid Mileena facts, then i would greatly appreciate it!!
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Kitana's MKG Ending/Mileena's MKG Ending
Mileena: Kitana! I want your status! I want to be princess of Edenia! It is my right!
Kitana: You are not my sister! You were created by Shang Tsung's Sorcery!
Mileena: No!
Kitana: You are evil and have no place in this realm! What right do you have to the throne of Edenia?
Mileena: You are right Kitana... but If I can not be princess of Edenia... then neither will yopu! *Super Uppercuts Kitana into her throne*
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KITANA
Mileena: You will die sister! *Takes out sai*
Kitana: Never! *Slams fist on button in throne, floor opens and Mileena falls*
MILEENA
Mileena: You will die sister *Takes out sai* *Does sai projectile*
Kitana: Ahhhhh! *Throne is knocked out of window with Kitana in it*
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that game had such bad acting it made me pee. Another fact about Mileena is that she does not consider Sindel as her mother, her only familly is Shao Khan and she dubs herself "His True Daughter"
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Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2005 9:47 pm
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what are all of mileena's roles in mksm?
i can add that in my story.
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I got Mk:sm and I think that I can start a new chapter. But, I think that I am gonna edit a lot more now!!!
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Welcome!
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