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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2005 10:26 pm
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This Fan-fic is going to be about Reptile.In MKDA,his boss,Shao Khan,was killed by the deadly alliance.This is Fan-fic is going to be how Reptile gets his revenge.Btw,it takes place after MKD.
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Part 1:Reptile vs. Cyrax
With the Dragon King's death,Reptile was reborn. The Dragon King had stolen his body,leaving his soul to wander in the Netherealm. Now that he was reborn,he could finally get his revenge on Nitara. Then,when that was done,he would kill the traitor Shang Tsung and Quan Chi. Reptile started hunting for Nitara. He soon came across a strang portal,which sent him to a place called Earthrealm.
Once he appeared on Earthrealm.he saw the cyborg ninja Cyrax. He followed Cyrax,remembering how he had defeated him in Outworld. Nitara's death would have to wait. Reptile shot out a ball of acid at the cyborg. It hit him. Cyrax turned around and saw Reptile,about to shoot out another ball of acid. This time Cyrax dodged the attack and jumped towards Reptile.Reptile dodged the attack and kicked Cyrax right in the stomach. He then launched a wave of punches hitting Cyrax before he hit the ground. Cyrax couldn't get up. Now that Cyrax couldn't move,Reptile prepared his fatality. He shot out a stream of acid at Cyrax. The acid went through his armor,melting it and the skin underneath .Reptile then shot his tongue out and ate Cyrax's head. Reptile's revenge was just beginning.
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I'm still trying to write part 2,but i'll probably be finished tomorrow
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2005 10:45 pm
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Good, but kinda short, don't you think?
I like it. I give it a 9
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DragonGod
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 1:47 am
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Thanks.I have 5 parts to the story.The other 4 parts are longer.Btw,your story about Mileena's past was really good.I give it a 10.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 4:42 am
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nice story and i agree with jay its too short but like you said that the other 4 parts are going to be longer i guess it will come out good
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:24 pm
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Dragongod: Hey thanks about my story, and remember to check it often because I add or edit to it a lot. For your story - I can't wait for part 2, so keep up with the good work.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 6:04 pm
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It's pretty good. I want to see what happens next.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 7:42 pm
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Part 2:Kano's Death
After killing Cyrax,Reptile started searching for a portal to lead back to Outworld. He soon found the portal,but it was guarded by a fat guy,who Reptile reconized as Bo Rai Cho. Reptile turned invisble,knowing that Bo Rai Cho was a powerful warrior. He carefully snuck past him,trying not to step on the fallen leaves surrounding the portal. He soon reached the portal and entered it. He was transported to Outworld.
As soon as he stepped foot in Outworld,a woman dressed in green clothes attacked Reptile. Reptile dodged the attack,but was hit by another attack that the woman launched. He got up,barely dodging the next attack the woman tried. She then took out a big spear and tried to stab Reptile with it. Reptile took out Kirehashi and blocked the spear attack. He then shot a ball of acid at the woman. She barely dodged the attack,but Reptile did a flying kick to the face. She got up,but Reptile started attacking endlessly .She soon went unconcious. Reptile was about to finish her,but he saw a figure that looked like Kano watching the match. He ran away as soon as Reptile looked at him. Reptile followed him,waiting for the right moment to strike. The woman would live another day.
Kano led Reptile into the living forest. Kano eventually got away from Reptile. Reptile started trying to hunt Kano,but a warrior dressed in a yellow ninja costume got in the way. "Hey creature.Do you know where I can find Quan Chi?"asked the warrior. "No,but I am hunting him too.I could help you hunt him down if you help me find someone. I'm looking for a warrior named Kano. He has a robotic eye. Have you seen him?"replied Reptile. "Yes.He passed by here not too long ago. I'll show you where he went" said Scorpion. Scorpion led him to the ruins of Shang Tsung's Palace. There,Kano stood,looking at the ruins. Reptile and Scorpion approached Kano.
"This time,you wont be getting away from me" Reptile said. Reptile attacked using a series of punches. Kano blocked all of them,but was suprised by a jump kick Reptile attempted. He flew back,only to be hit by an acid bolt from Reptile. Kano took out 2 dagger like weapons. He pounced at Reptile,trying to hit him with the daggers. Reptile took out Kirehashi and blocked the attack. Kano tried his best to hit Reptile with his swords,but Reptile blocked every attack he tried. Reptile kicked him in the stomach,hurling Kano back 2 feet. Reptile pounced at Kano and kicked him in the face. Kano barely got up. "We will finish this at the Mortal Kombat Tournament on Earthrealm." Kano said. "No. You will die today" Reptile said. Suddenly,Reptile took Kirehashi and cut off Kano's head. When the head hit the ground,Reptile shot a stream of acid at it,turning it into a skull. "We must go to the tournament. That is probably the best place to find Quan Chi"said Scorpion. Reptile and Scorpion headed to a portal and stepped in.It took them to Earthrealm.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 11:02 pm
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Part 3:The New Mortal Kombat Tournament
Reptile and Scorpion stepped foot into Earthrealm. The weather had changed since Reptile had been away. It was raining hard,which meant mostly everyone in this area were inside their homes. Reptile and Scorpion wandered the realm cluelessly,not knowing where the Mortal Kombat Tournament that Kano mentioned was being held. They soon came across a town with a sign saying "The Mortal Kombat Tournament is back. This time it is hosted by Shang Tsung yet again.". "WHAT!I thought Shang Tsung was dead" said Scorpion.
Soon,a bolt of lightning came hurling to the ground. A man surrounded with lightning appeared. He had red eyes,and looked like the Thunder God Raiden. "I thought you were dead too."said Scorpion. "No.The gods let me live so I can restore peace to Earthrealm. Shang Tsung isn't dead either. That time that we were attacked by Onaga,I sacrificed myself,but I teleported them to safety,hoping that they would find a way to stop Onaga. But I see I should have let them die. I was a fool to let them survive. They still have evil intentions,as do you Reptile. I know that you want to kill Quan Chi and Shang Tsung. I must ask you to go to the Mortal Kombat Tournament and try to beat them. I'll try to make sure that you don't fight my other warriors. Follow me to the location of the Tournament." Dark Raiden said. He led them to a boat which was going to set sail for an island far away from the old island the Tournament was held.
The trip to the island took 3 days. The boat stopped at a dock. "Follow this road to the place the tournament is at." said one of the boat workers. Reptile and Scorpion followed the path. Reptile had dressed himself so noone would reconize him. He looked at some of the other competitors. He saw Johnny Cage,Sonya,most of the old competitors from the last tournament. But one of the competitors caught Reptile's eye. It was Lui Kang,who everyone thought was dead. If he was to win the tournament,he had to find some way to eliminate Lui Kang from the tournament. The tournament was going to be harder than he thought.
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I may have 6 parts total now that I came up with this part.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 11:48 pm
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good story can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2005 4:39 pm
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It's really good, DragonGod. You forget to put a space in between sentences though.
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2005 7:16 pm
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| Jay wrote: | | It's really good, DragonGod. You forget to put a space in between sentences though. |
Alright.I fixed that.I probably wont be able to get part 4 done today because my computer is lagging.
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:55 am
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I'm really interested in this now.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 1:41 pm
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I wont be able to do part 4 for a while because i'm going on vacation for 1 week.I'll write part 4 when I come back.
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 4:36 am
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Can't wait. LOL
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 4:18 pm
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reptile in favor is my fave character so keep it up i give it a 14 out of 10 
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