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RYAN999
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Joined: 31 May 2005
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 3:43 pm
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the lone cyborg
smoke alone in outworld wondering what to do with his life.his masters dead so eventually free but no money no place and stuck in a robotic form.he sat down and thought his only talent is killing or fighting.he immeadietly.thought of a job that pays well and is good at.bounty hunter.he has the skills and the equipment so why not.his first job was to assasinate kano of the black dragon.he knew it would be tough but he cold do it.he found that there is an abandoned underground theater .thats where they are.the security was high.he went invisible and smashed theirs heads together and dumped their bodies in a cave.he stayed invisible jumped over the gate.kano was heavily guarded.it is 3 story building.kano is in a room on the 2nd floor.smoke got to kanos room .then kicked the door open and fired a missile striaght at kanos skull the building shook.smoke knew that he was in trouble.he took kanos knife and pulled out kanos laser eye just for proof.then he ran undecteded until he ran into a thug smoke suddenly he stabbed the thug in the neck.the thug screamed.and in a whisker he was surrounded.so he prepared for kombat.one lunged at him but smoke give him a roundhouse kick .so the attacker went flying into a another member .he whispered to himself 2 down 8 to go.smoke threw a bomb at them .that blew 2 to history.he uppercutted another and blocked a few quick hooks and followed up with a series of kicks.that whiped 3 more off the face of the earthrealm.the final one ran.smoke ecaped.smoke went back to the assigner.his reward was 10 thousand koins.after that he learned of a expert in nanotechnology.smoke tracked him down.the expert expected 10 thousand but smoke used a persuasive technique and got it for free.smoke back to his old self.smoke tasted a breath of fresh air .he said to himself "damn that feels good".smoke went on to become an allie of rain.rain and him went on doing jobs together.their nicknane was "double destrruction".
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calebbinns
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Joined: 22 Jul 2005
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 4:22 pm
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great stor y 10 out of 10 smoke kiks ass 
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RYAN999
TMK Kid Thunder
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 8:29 pm
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thanx
thanx alot 4 that.cheers mate
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ChibiHana
Hentai Connoisseur
Joined: 17 Apr 2005
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Location: not Okinawa... lame.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 7:17 am
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it might actually be good if you broke it up into paragraphs and used sentences. =(
*grammar nazi mode off*
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