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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 5:17 pm
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Thunder boomed across the night sky as the skies poured Rain. Kitana nervously took in a deap breath, the cold rain dripping from her body. She was supposed to be meeting with Liu Kang here. She couldn't help but feel worried. Liu was quite punctual, he never let Kitana down when it came to meetings. The more time that had passed, the less she believed that he was comming. She looked out from over the barriers atop the temple. Earthrealm was quite beautiful from this view. Her mind was heavy with worry lately. Her realm of Edenia was under attack from Shao Khan's forces and now the Deadly Alliance was formed in Outworld.
"Kitana..." a voice rapsed behind her. She turned quickly to see Liu Kang, severly beaten and gushing blood. "Liu! What has happened?" she asked in shock. As she ran to him, a dagger emerged from through his chest. Blood splurted down the Monk's body as he cried in agony. "No!" Kitana shrieked in horror. Another dagger was raised to his throat. In a quick motion, Liu Kang's throat was slit and he fell to the floor dead. "NO!" Kitana wailed. Her blood boiled when she spotted her lovers killer.
A woman stood behind Liu's body, a woman Kitana loathed with all her heart and soul. Dressed in a very revealing pink battle uniform, her black hair flowed in the winds and her daggers dripped in blood. Mileena stared at Kitana gleefully, with a sadistic grin as she watched Kitana sob at the sight of her dead lover.
"You bitch...." Kitana growled, "I should have destroyed you while I had the chance!".
"NO!" Mileena mockingly impersonated, letting out a maniacal laugh. "Face it Kitana. You cant escape from me. Now I have you. Your thousands of feet in the air and you have no chance to escape. My Sais are pleading to taste your blood!"
Kitana drew her fans instantly. "And is your retarded mouth itching to taste my boot?" Kitana asked. Mileena simply giggled. "No, boots aren't on the menu tonight. FLESH is!". They stared at each other for a few seconds, wordless, before the two leapt at each other.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 5:48 pm
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Altough both women were fierce combatants, neither was able to best the other. Mileena started the fight with a poweful axe kick into Kitana's face, catching the princess off guard and knocking her fans from her grip. Staggering, Kitana felt the blood drip from her broken nose. She ran at Mileena and landed many punches into the mutants face. Mileena grabbed Kitana's arm and flung her into a nearby statue. In agony, Kitana got back to her feet and uppercuted Mileena in the jaw. Mileena let out a painfull roar as some of her razor sharp teeth fell from her mouth. She dived at Kitana, grabbing a lump of her hair, before ramming her face into her knee several times. She grinned in the face of the princess, delighted at the chaos she had caused her. Thinking quickly, Kitana ripped off Mileena's veil. Mileena shrieked and covered her deformed mouth.
Kitana swept Mileena off her feet with a well aimed kick. She ran to grab her fans while Mileena scurried around the pools of rainwater looking for her veil. After locating it, she got to her feet and drew her sais. Kitana blocked many of her violent stabs, altough she failed to block a stab to the shoulder. Holding her shoulder in pain, Kitana swung her fan at Mileena's stomach, causing a large, deep wound. Their blood began to drip from the tower in pools. The fight was like a battle of the gods. Their screams and roars were often drowned out by the loud crashes of thunder. Mileena got the upperhand and kicked Kitana in the side of the head, instantly knocking her out. She looked down at the beaten Kitana and realised that she had won.
Picking up Kitana's unconscious body, Mileena walked to the edge of the tower. She looked at the beautiful princess's face in pure hatred. How she had longed for this day. "Farewell Kitana!" Mileena said in pure delight. She hurled Kitana off the tower and watched as the princess plumeted to her death. She savoured the moment as if it was her last.
"Princess! Princess! Are you ok?" A monk asked, emerging from the stairway. "I'm...fine but Liu...he was killed by that maniac. In our struggle she fell from the tower" Mileena said, carefully plotting her sentance. She made her way over to the monk. "I need to get back to Outworld and inform Bo Rai Cho".
"Of course princess Kitana. Follow me" the monk said. Mileena's trickery had enabled her escape. Now, she could rule Edenia as a princess. Nobody but Baraka had knowledge of this plan. Her destiny, was at long last fulfilled. But suddenly, Mileena grew suspicious. She was aware of the fact that she would gain power as a Princess, but what if Baraka wanted some of her power? What if he let the secret slip? Mileena licked the blood from her Sais. It was tasty. "You'll taste more when we reach the Beetle Lair..." Mileena promised her weapons.
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Mileena had sent word from one of the Edenian guards that she wanted to meet with her lover, asking him to meet with her in the ancient Beetle Lair located in Outworld. Altough Baraka was the only person Mileena actually showed her face to, the only person she ever bonded with, if they were to stay together there could be trouble. Mileena had worked hard to slay Kitana. Bribing the Dragon King to free her was no easy task. She could have simply kied the possessed Kitana in the Dragon Kng's throne room, however, she took sadistic pleasure in seeing Kitana vulnerable. As long as the princess stayed under the influence of Onaga's magic, she could never feel emotional pain. Mileena wanted Kitana to feel thousands of different kinds of pain before her death. If Baraka and herself were to rise to power, Baraka would be king and have more power than herself. She refused to allow this to happen.
Baraka entered the Beetle Lair, but his scent was somewhat...peculiar. He did not smell like he usually did. He scented of fear. This was unusual, Baraka was fearless. It was what attracted her to him. Now, he reeked of terror. He was hesitating. "How good of you to show Baraka. How did the diversionary forces go?" Mileena asked. "You know damn well bitch! They slaughtered us! You cursed our armies and now I'll tear you apart for it!" Baraka growled, his blades protruding from his arms. "Is that so?" Mileena asked sarcastically. "In that case....bring it on!" she roared. She dived at Baraka, the two clashing with a range of kicks, slashes and punches. During the duel, Baraka managed to cut Mileena across the waist. She grabbed him, and hurled him into an ancient glass scultpure nearby. As Baraka got to his feet, Mileena hurled a flurry of kicks at him, knocking him through a wall and into a chamber below. She jumped down after him, drawing her Sais as Baraka picked up a heavy axe standing nearby. The threw each other one final look before they leapt to kill each other.
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this is pretty good seeing that you rewrote the MKD teaser. 10/10
I also just wanted to know this: are you trying to make your story accurate to the storyline?
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this isn't just pretty good... I think it's damn near excellent. such descriptive wording. I could picture the story in my mind as I read each paragraph. very well written. =D
and it's about Mileena! *gushes* <3
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It is very very discriptive. I wish I can do that!
I cant wait for the next part!
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Baraka let out a fierce, thundering roar that shook dust from the old pillars and bricks in the Beetle Lair's lower chambers. He swung the heavy Thoraxe at Mileena, barely missing her arm. She quickly twirrled out of the way, delivering a fierce roundhouse into the back of the Tarkatan's head. Baraka staggered, spitting blood from his serated mouth. He punched Mileena in the face, making her slightly dizzy, before he winded her with a kick to the stomach. Mileena fell into the rubble, a cloud of dust rising from her fall. "A pity I never got to fully enjoy what your body can do in your final moments alive Mileena! I wonder if your prettier sister was as good beneath the sheets as you?" Baraka taunted as he made his approach to her. Mileena moaned in pain. Her wound was still bleeding and she was having difficulty catching her breath. But she knew she couldn't give in. Not while Baraka mocked her like this.
Her body burned in anger. How dare that filthy barbarian compare her to a snobby bitch like Kitana? She would not allow this, nobody would disrespect the new princess of Edenia! Baraka made his approach, the Thoraxe in his hands gleaming in the red llight of the chamber. He smiled, showing rows of sharp teeth that were like daggers encased in his gums. "Im sure my soldiers will enjoy the benefits of your limp body!" he sneered. Suddenly, Mileena let out an empowering roar as she got to her feet. She hurled her painful Sai energy into the creatures face, blinding him with the pain. She kicked Baraka in the chest with such force she heard his ribs snap. The Tarkatan fell to the floor, coughing up blood.
"How dare you disrespect the princess of Edenia!" Mileena bellowed. Her Sais were clenched in her hand tightly. Noticing something in the corner of her eye, Mileena turned to see a pile of Beetles sapping away at the fallen drops of blood. She let out a cruel smile. She sat on Baraka's chest, ignoring his cries of pain. Blood dripped from his mouth. Getting her Sais, Mileena carved her name down Baraka's body, before impaling her Sais through his shins with such force they anchored him to the ground. The Tarkatan warrior's screams of pain was like music to her ears. The Beetles began to make their way over to the fallen warrior's body as Mileena walked away. "You will not escape the Tarkatan so easily traitor!" Baraka called to her. Mileena just laughed as she made her way out of the room, his cries of pain becoming more and more distant.
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Thank you all for your replies. I'll add more it gets better too so keep watchin this topic! In your response Jay, it isnt COMPLETELY like Deception, just the Beetle Lair was. The rest is all mine
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Mileena's goal was close, but there was still one more hurdle to face. Being a princess was powerful, but being a Queen...that was the epitome of power, especially in a Realm as powerful as Edenia. Mileena had to learn of a way to get at Queen Sindel. This was not going to be easy, Sindel has always been well guarded. Recently, the Edenian Knight, Jade, has been quite close to the Queen since her escape from the Dragon King's stronghold. If Mileena was to slay Sindel, Jade would have to die too. This slightly troubled Mileena. She had worked with Jade during their time as Shao Khan's assasins. But by Jade's death Mileena would be Queen. Unlike her worthless sister, Mileena had no compassion. She had already killed her lover, a work colleague would be nothing.
Mileena headed for Onaga's stronghold, to reveal to him her information. The Dragon King sat on a gigantic throne, his olive-green scales glistening in the dramatic lighting behind him. The room was quite cold and the scent of blood wafted through the air. Surrounding his throne was a ring of spikes and magma. Judging by the cleanliness of the floor,
a pool of blood had just been cleaned up. Mileena was still amazed that her former ally, Reptile, had turned into this powerful entity. She bowed before him before recalling her recent activities.
"My Lord, I have finally achieved my destiny. I have slain princess Kitana and the monk Liu Kang. But upon my return, the mutant Baraka accused me of betrayal. In your name, I killed him" Mileena admitted. "Impresive Mileena. I am happy to hear both Kitana and Liu Kang are dead, however, I cannot replace a soldier as valuable as Baraka. You say he turned against you?" Onaga asked. "Yes my lord. We were supposed to be partners in the assault against Bo Rai Cho's forces but he accused me of the destruction of his milita. I knew that with such unloyalty that he could be a threat against your rise to power. I had no choice but to kill him" Mileena lied. "You have served me well Mileena. How may I reward you?" Onaga asked. "I need access to Queen Sindel" Mileena said. "And why is that?" Onaga asked. "Sindel will be able to tell the difference between myself and Kitana. If I kill her, both of us are safe" Mileena informed him. "I see....leave it to me. Wait for her at the Dragon Temple in the mountains. She shall arrive tonight if I m correct" Onaga replied. "Thank you" Mileena said as she bowed.
However, Onaga's voice stopped her from leaving the room. "Halt! You cannot fight in your condition. Stand still" Onaga said, rising from his throne. He raised a hand a beam of energy lanced into Mileena, making her body numb. She felt a refreshing feeling surge through her. Looking at her arm and stomach, Mileena noticed that her cuts were gone and so were her bruises. "Thank you my Lord" Mileena said, before leaving the Dragon King's throne room. Soon, oh so soon, Mileena would ambush Sindel. She left the stronghold and made her way to the Dragon Temple.
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Before making her trip to the Dragon Mountain, Mileena realised she had left her signature weapon, her Sais, in the Beetle Lair. She raided the Dragon King's armoury until she found a pair of Sais that looked identical to her previous ones. After packing her blades away, she made her way towards the Dragon Temple. She climbed up the towering stairs, leading high up to the peak of the cold mountain, reaching the Dragon Temple. The Dragon Temple consisted of four large Dojo's, each one with a large golden dragon statue that was illuminated by candles. Two large chineese dragons held large lanturns in their mouths that illuminated the area. Mileena noticed a dark and spacious area on the roof of one of the Dojos. She climbed on top of the Dojo and sat in silence, waiting like a hungry predator for its next victim.
The journey had taken hours, but Mileena had not long to wait. After roughly a half hour of waiting, she spotted two women make their way up the stairs. The first was a dark skinned woman, wearing a provacative green outfit. In her hands was a large staff. Mileena recognised this woman as Jade. Behind her, was a woman with long, flowing white and black hair. Wearing a regal looking purple swimsuit, Sindel eyed her surroundings. Both women seemed quite alert and cautious. "Are you certain this is the place Jade?" Sindel asked. "I'm quite sure my Queen. the Tarkatan soldiers I defeated said she is here" Jade replied. "Oh...Kitana. What have they done to you?" Sindel asked, her voice full of sorrow. Mileena sat and waited. She was not visable, all she had to do was wait for the right moment.
"Would she be incarcarated in there?" Jade asked. "Go Jade. I will follow" Sindel instructed. Jade made her way towards the Dojo entrance. Thinking quickly, Mileena lept from the dojo, her Sais ready in her hands. "Mileena!" Jade gasped. Mileena leapt at Jade like a cat, plunging her Sai through her head. Jade fell to the floor dead, her blood flowing from her lifeless body. "Jade!!" Sindel gasped. She grabbed her Kwan Dao and stood her ground. "How dare you!? What do you want of me you wretched creature?" Sindel demanded. "I want to cut you, limb from limb, then claim your throne" Mileena said casually as she licked Jade's blood from her daggers. "You're sick! Edenia will never fall to you! I thought Kitana killed you years ago?!" Sindel replied in shock. "Guess she didnt did she? If your wondering where she is just ask the White Lotus. They burned her flattened body assuming she was me" Mileena answered. "You...you killed my daughter?" Sindel asked, tears flowing in her eyes. "And now I have come for you. Jade got it easy. I respected her in a way. You, I hate you just as much as Kitana. You will die painfully" Mileena said. "For Edenia!!" Sindel roared as she began her assault on Mileena.
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Sindel's heartbreak had inspired her to fight like never before. Though the Queen was royal, she could fight as well as any soldier Mileena had ever faced. Her time as Shao Khan's bride had granted Sindel powers that were unatainable to any mere mortal. Sindels's kicks were well aimed, as each of them landed painfully into Mileena's torso. she almost knocked Mileena out with a powerful smack from her Kwan Dao. Backing away, Mileena raised her Sais. She let out a deep roar as she somersaulted over Sindel, pulling her Sais down the Queens back as she landed. Sindel howled in agony, her back dripping in blood. She let out a piercing scream, which made Mileena numb. It was like listening to a rusty nail being dragged over a chalkboard.
Mileena covered her ears and cowered on the floor. Sindel's screaming ended as she caught Mileena with a strong rising kick to the face. Dropping one of her weapons, Mileena staggered into a statue. Thinking quickly, she hurled one of her Sais at Sindel, impaling her through her leg. The Queen fell to the floor, desperatley trying to remove the dagger from her leg. As she struggled to pull the blade from her, Mileena got to her feet. Sindel was helpless. She began to crawl away, blood flowing from her leg. Her moans of agony was histerical to Mileena. "Old bitches like you shouldn't be entering tournaments like these Sindel. I mean, look at you. Your pathetic. Dressing up in a purple bathing suit when your hitting old age?" Mileena taunted. Sindel still tried to escape, but her efforts were in vain. "You fell for Onaga's trap woman. He sacrificed a few Tarkatan soldiers so you would come running here looking for Kitana. It didnt work. Jade even died because of you. What kind of Queen are you?" Mileena asked.
Sindel began to weep. "I cant allow it...I cant allow Edenia to fall into your hands!" Sindel sobbed. "The Edenians wont ever find out. Gossip spreads. All the Edenians need to hear is that Onaga left a scar on Kitana's face and she must wear a veil. Those stupid people will believe I am Kitana and I will rule Edenia" Mileena revealed. Sindel was feeling quite weak, she was loosing blood quickly. "But all that fighting has made me quite hungry Sindel. And you look like a meal fit for a Queen" Mileena said as she removed her veil. Sindel's horrified screams echoed across the mountain, as Mileena began to bite off her limbs and chew on her flesh. Mileena knew perciselly were to bite Sindel, so she wouldnt pass out from the pain. After minutes of pure torture, Mileena took one large bite and mercilessly ripped Sindel's head from her body. She grabbed the decapatated head from the hair and looked at Sindel's horrified expression with glee, as if it was a war trophy. Mileena laughed, and kicked the head from the mountain as if it was a toy ball. She grabbed Sindel's royal ring and made her way from the Mountains.
As Queen of Edenia, Mileena would rule like a vicious tyrant. Onaga, her former superior, had been slain by Shao Khan, and Outworld was under the rule of the Emporer and the Shokan prince, Goro. Her first act, was to lure the Earthrealm fighters into Edenia to throw a false banquet, where she pretended that as Kitana, she had finally brought peace to the realms. As the Earthrealm fighters arrived in the Edenian throne room, an army of Tarkatan swarmed the halls and brutally slaughtered them all. The heads of the fallen warriors were given to the Emporer as a celebration gift of his rule. Then, she allowed the Tarkatan race to pillage Edenia and make the realm their home. As ruler of the Tarkata, Mileena would rule for many millenia as a savage and ruthless queen.
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*claps as hard he could
That diserves a standing ovation. That was good! The word usage, the character portrayals! Excellent!
(btw, If I said this too soon and you still have more to write or add, then I will feel so emabarrased!)
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Well...I'd like to add more but I think I finished it off in the last chapter. Glad to hear you like it so much Jay! I plan on writing more but that depends on the feedback I get. So guys, what did ya think of my Mileena story?
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Omg...DUDE!! That was excellent! It was very descriptive and written quite well. I'll admit I was sad when Jade died  You portrayed the characters so well. Excellent job!  It sounds like something Mileena would definately want to do
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